ok here are my drawing..... wat you think??

Original



edit with photoshop

the original is better by far.

however, be careful with those eyes.

hair works out well, but work with the face and more expressive ones, or deeper ones.

oh wow, the original looks so kool. Not all too sure about the colored one though. You could work a little when it comes to detail but over all its a real awesome picture. Good job^^

That is really nice. I don't like the colored one, either, for some reason. The original black-n-white looks fine to me. Good job. ^_~

i like ur drawing reminds me of how i used to draw

thanks ppl........thanks for your opinions....