Well I haven't updated it in a while since I've been studying for midterms but I plan to take it back up again. It's probably my most successful story judging from the response I get for it so I thought I might share it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2668020/1/

The first chapter is a bit weak but it's still average. And I won't beg but, if it isn't too much trouble, I'd like to know where my weakpoints are.