My new fanfic! It might be a little rusty at first...but its my First!
Its based on before the 14th Magna....might change it a little later...

Chapter 1: The Grip of Fear...

It was a bright sunny day and the weather was great! Sasuke had just left his house for a walk. He had been sleping all morning and needed to get out.

Sakura: Oh?! Hi Sasuke!
Sakura had been stalking Sasuke since the past few days. She really wanted him and even if he left the continent, she'd find a way to get to him!

Sakura: Hey! Wait up, Sasuke!
Sasuke: Why?!....

Sasuke started picking up the pace. He wanted to lose Sakura around the corner. walking went to jogging and eventually to running. Soon, the ninja was sprinting but Sakura was still just one step behind him... She thought he was playing a game with her!
Sakura: You're so great! This is so much fun!
She was panting now. Sasuke had finally outrun her...but where had he turned up?! As the Ninja looked around, he got confused.

Sasuke: Where am I?
The Ninja turned around to go back but all the sudden he was in the forest. Thinking that was wierd, the ninja stepped forward and momentarrily, day turned into night.

???: Tresspasser...
Sasuke: What?! who's there?

As Sasuke stepped back, he fell... he spun through the air and openned his eyes...

Sakura: Hi!
He was now by the river..
Sasuke: You Have to get out of here, Sakura! Hang on...
As Sasuke inspected the girl, her eyes glowed red. Sasuke fell back with shock.

Sasuke: What do you want? Leave me alone.
Sakura: I just want to play!
Sasuke started crawling back now until he crossed his hand over a rusty Shuriken.
Sasuke: Get Back Or I'll use this.

Lifting the shuriken, Sasuke reallized it was a snake. He screamed and turned around. Now, the ninja was running pointlessly until he banged into a tree.The frightenned Ninja turned around and faced the possessed girl.
Sakura: Lets Play!

The Girl slowly came closer and openned her mouth. Sasuke screamed at what he saw...Sakura was transforming - her Canines started lengthening and she started growing. Within moments, she was twice as big as Sasuke...

Sasuke: No! It Can't be!
A minute had passed before the girl turned into a giant snake...
Sasuke: What's Hapenning? SOMEONE HELP ME.
The Snake slithered forwards and wrapped itself around the fearfuly frozen ninja...Slowly, the snake squeezed tightand all Sasuke could see was a big black hole coming for him...The Snake's eyes openned wide and with a flash, it pulled the ninja into its mout...

Sasuke: NOOOOOOO!!!!!
The Ninja leapt forwards and banged his head into the corner of his bed. He oppened his eyes and cautiosly inspected his surroundings...Everything was ok. He was on the floor beside his bed in his room...it was all just a nightmare...Realizing this, the ninja wiped the sweat off his forehead, crawled back onto his bed and went back to sleep..........
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HOW WAS THAT?! I LOVED IT!!
What do you people think?!
I might have mis-spelled some words! SORRY!

Sorry for the Double-post...but I'm already done on the second Chapter!! lol
Thanks! I realy appreciate sll the comments! They're all good so far!
Here ya go!

Chapter 2: Graduation!

As the alarm clock rang, Naruto jumped out of bed. It was a great day and he
was going to try and graduate. He quickly jumped out of bed and ran into the
shower. After a few minutes, he was refreshed and ready. He poured some
cereal into a bowl and took it into his room. A few minutes later, he was
completely ready and he burst out of the house with exitement...
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It was nothing special for Sasuke. He was only thinking of what lied ahead.
Confidently, as usual, he rose from his bed and got changed.He didn't eat aything
for breakfast. He was still recovering from and thinking about his nightmare. It
was all too confusing. He was thinking about what it had meant - if anything....
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Sakura woke up with abig smile on her face. She'd been dreaming of Sasuke and
couldn't wait to see him in school. 'He's so Dreamy!' she said as she ate her
breakfast. When she finished, she dashed skipped out of the house!
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Sensei: Now, Sakura please perform the specified Jutsu...
Sakura thinking: Yes....Now's my chance to show off to Sasuke! I hope he's watching!
Sensei: We're Waiting...
Sakura looked around and finally got ready. a few minutes later, she sucessfully
passed but she was disappointed again when she saw that Sasuke had been staring
at the floor the whole time.
Sensei: Well done. You've passed.
Sakura: Yess! Thanks!
Sensei: Next up, Sasuke. Please show us what you can do.
Sasuke didn't speak. He hardly ever spoke. This mysteriousness was probably what
kept Sakura hooked to him. Silently, he performed his technique and passed with full
marks.
Sensei: You've Passed. Next up, Naruto.
Naruto: Oh man. Why do I have to do the technique I'm worst at?!
Naruto put up a bad show and failed. He then left the room after class and sat on a
swing. He constantly found people staring at him and saying things like he's not worth
passing and that he's a YOU KNOW WHAT! After a while, a small tear trickled down his
cheek and he left the playground.
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Sensei: You know, Naruto, there is another way to pass...
Naruto: There is? What is it? Tell me.
The teacher whispered something into the boy's ear and Naruto leapt off the rooftop
and went racing towards the 3rd Hokage's residence......

END OF CHAPTER!! This is kind of an Enhanced and edited version of the Original
Version but don't worry...there are more surprises to come!!
How was that chap?!

Chapter 3: Chaos

Naruto's heart was pounding faster and faster as he neared his destination.
Naruto: At Last....I'm here.
3rd Hokage: Huh?! What? Who's there?

Naruto had arrived but it seemed that he'd been caught. He had to do something quickly otherwise he'd be toast!

Naruto: Well...umm...I...SEXY NO JITSU!!!
With a puff of smoke, the ninja transformed into the most beautiful, naked girl the old man had ever seen!
3rd Hokage: AAAA!!!

The old man's face turned red within seconds as his eyes rolled over. With a huge smile, he fell to the floor. Naruto turned back into himself and stared at the fainted old man.
Naruto: Oops! I guess i went a little too far! Well...sweet dreams!

Naruto turned and looked at the open door..
Naruto: Jackpot!

The boy entered and took a left. Then a right and finally another left. He had been told these directions by his sensei. He approached a chest. He saw some mystical markings on it but they meant nothing to him. The ninja openned the chest andcarefully lifted a big scroll.
Naruto: So...Its true!

He put the scroll into a bag and tied it around himself. As he turned around, he heard footsteps getting louder. He knew what this meant. He quickly ran to the left and escaped through a window.
As the 3rd Hokage entered the room, recovering from his perverted actions, his face turned pale. He saw the openned chest and knew what had hapenned. Without sparing a second, he ran straight out and went to Sensei Iruka.

3rd Hokage: Iruka! Iruka! WAKE UP! THERE HAS BEEN AN ACCIDENT!
Iruka: Don't worry mom, ill eat my greens!
The sensei was fast asleep. There was nothing the 3rd Hokage could do so he wacked Iruka with his pillow!

Iruka: WHAT?! Im up! Im up! Whats going on?!
3rd Hokage: There's been an accident...
It took 5 minutes for Sensei Iruka to learn what had hapenned. He burst out of the room and went straight to call out a search. Within an hour, everyone in the town was running around screaming and shouting. It was CHAOS. People were shouting nasty things about Naruto being Evil. Iruka couldn't juststand there and watch. He had to act and so he did. He ran straight for the forest.
Iruka: NARUTO! COME OUT!
there was no answer....there was only one thing that could be done....hunting!

well....there's the 3rd chapter!
i hope you liked it, everyone!

anyway, next chap coming soon!!

lol

ooo, interesting! I have to say its an awsome idea, and written very original. The first chapter was my faveorite, but the second and third were delightful also. Please continue, i await the next chapter.

I really liked it. don't stop writting i wanna read more!

Omg. It is really cool. I want to see some more too.

wow....why do you write a book

me too!!! you could write an whole manga with this stuff...
hahaha lol...

lol
thankS!
i'll post the next chapter soon...as soon as i finish it!

That's good!
Hurry up with the next chapter kid...

Keep writing

good at sigs and your own writing

ding ding ding we have a winner lol

I agree

Shame i never got to finish it, lol
thought i failed after the first chapter..
( i was right! xD)


[yeah, its me; Kid]