The colors, the colors, the colors! You really have to tone it down. Yet again try to stay away from the Kingdom Hearts font, and try not to blend your pictures in too much. When your using a render for a background it usually works to create lines that arent needed when your just using your characters face. On the other hand, the effects on the Goku on the left arent bad, if you look to his right I like the right streaks, they seem to be bursts of energy. But yet again, you really have to try and find better stocks.