Yeah.. this is another poem that i made recently.. I got this title from a song by Within Temptation.. called Frozen.. (what else..? XD) I was watching the video clip.. by the way you guyz should watch the v. clip if you haven't.. ok.. -_- i'm going off topic.. XD so.. here it is then..

dedicated to my someone..


Frozen

I was frozen..
We were having fun..
When I awoken..
The damage was done..
I was just frozen..
How could I have known..?
Till now that memory..
Chills me to the bone..

Still I was frozen..
What could I do..?
I could only watch..
And whisper to you..
Were those words just not enough..?
Or was I just too late..?
Could I have made it better..
If I was not frozen again..?


yep.. that's it.. bad no..? -_- yeah.. -_- eventhough all my poems are based on real events.. this one means a lot to me.. eventhough it's bad.. XP

hmm *sniff* my tears are frozen..anyway nice poem 11/10

lol ray! thanx.. =3 but still... it's not that good you know... T^T

it is good i mean i could make awesome poems just like *snap* that so thats pretty good

Very nicely done A little messy on form but fantastic none the less. You can tell this means alot to you because of how powerful each line is and it makes you think 'Omg I must hug her'

9/10

lol matt!! XP can ya now..? hnn... i think ran knows who i write my poems for.. @_@ if i'm not mistaken that is.. XP