This is the REMAKE of Naruto Redone. Since you know Kyu is like gone I think it'll be better if I remade this. And YES! That means we are starting ALL OVER! Please request your character in the Request topic when I put that up okay? Oh and we're in Shippuuden series (Time-Skip)

Go to the Request topic to request who you wanna play as! (Didn't know I had to fudgin spell it out for you <_<)
http://www.narutocommunity.net/forums/Naru...Req-t24501.html


RULES!:
People who don't RP in 3 days are out of the RP!
You can be up to 10 characters
You CAN have an original character but please be....dare I say it.....original
Actually write a COMPLETE sentence!
Don't use other people's characters
Yes you can die if you want
If a character has two ** then that means that character is a tailed beast host and the number beside their name means the tailed beasts number (Example Gaara is number 1, Naruto is number 9)
Be active please! =3
If you get lost in the RP just PM me and I'll catch you up
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Characters: (I'll put pictures soon. If not. Never.)
Anko-
Asuma-
Chiyo-
Chouji-Rangiku_Matsumoto
Dan (Tsunade's old boyfriend and Shizune's Uncle)-
Danzou- zetsufan_105
Deidara-zetsufan_105
Dosu-
Ebisu-
First Hokage-
Fourth Kazekage-
(1)**Gaara-zetsufan_105
Gato-
Haku-
Hayate-
Hiashi-
Hidan-zetsufan_105
Hinata-
Iruka-
Ino-Rangiku_Matsumoto
Itachi-
Jiraiya-
Jirobo-
Juugo-
Kabuto-
Kaiza-
Kakashi-
Kakuzu-zetsufan_105
Kankuro-VK
Karin-
Karui-
Kiba-villageknucklehead
Kidomaru-
(8)**Kirabi-
Kimimaro-
Kin-
Kisame-zetsufan_105
Konan-
Konohamaru-
Kurenai-
Kushina (Naruto's Mother)-
Madara/Tobi-zetsufan_105
Might Gai-
Minato Namikaze-
Mizuki-
(9)**Naruto-VK
Nawaki-
Neji-
Obito-
Omoi-ZF
Orochimaru-
Pain-zetsufan_105
Raikage-
Rin-
Rock Lee-
Sai-villageknucklehead
Sakon/Ukon-
Sakura-
Samui-
Sasori-zetsufan_105
Sasuke-zetsufan_105
Second Hokage-
Shikamaru-VK
Shino-VK
Shisui-
Shizune-
Suigetsu-
Tayuya-
Tazuna-
Temari-villageknucklehead
Tenten-
Third Hokage-
Tsunade-Rangiku_Matsumoto
Yahiko-
Yamato-ZF
Yashamaru-
(2)**Yugito-
Yura-
Zabuza-
Zaku-
Zetsu-zetsufan_105

(just a quick question so when someone uses like oh *frog no jutsu* is that the only time you use these *****)


(i guess i'll start)

(can i start??)

(No you use teh floating stars (XD) whenever you do an action. For example:

*Throws shuriken* or *turns left* but I guess you could use them for jutsus and stuff Your choice really)

(Oh and YESH! You may start )

(well do i have to use them for action's ? i'm no really good with those.)



pein waited as he called for the akatsuki member's "must they always be late." he said to himself as he sat in his 'throne'.




kakuzu walked towards the hideout entrance. "first one i guess." he said as he walked in.





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Naruto walked around the village. "where is the noodle shop!" he said as he looked down each street. "why can't i find it now!" he said putting his hands behind his head.




(that's the way i RP is it okay?)

(No you don't have to. I usually just write out the actions like it was story Like I said your choice really)


(Yup good rping. I'll RP soon. X_X But I have alot of homework to do, but I'll still RP......I hope <.<)

(oaky i'll just wait......but i'll use these***** for jutsu EX: *TOAD NO JUTSU* okey dokey ^^)

Sasori walked into the hideout in his true form. Not in his usual,Hiruko puppet. He sat at the back and looked around. Sigh.


"Tch. Why am I always early?" He asked himself.

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As the sun rose, Temari woke up and rubbed her teal colored eyes. She sat up so that she was sitting on the edge of the bed. She looked through the window and sighed.

"Another beautiful morning." She said lazily yawning.

pein waited as he heard two akatsuki. "ah the two i really count on here first." he said as he rested his head on the back of the chair.


kakuzu walked out from a room. "first you i'd have to see to believe it." he said as he looked towards pein's door.


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Naruto walked some more. "ahhhhhh where is it!" he said as he clumsily crashed into a food stand.

He glared at Kakuzu.

"Shut up." He said plainly. He really wasn't in the mood.

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She sighed and looked over at the clock.

"Hmmm maybe I could go visit Konoha. Maybe Shikamaru is there." She started to blush. She never told anybody but she had a major crush on Shikamaru. So yeah she's a little older than him but come on! He's pretty cute and besides they always hang out. So everyone pretty much thinks they're going out even though they both deny it.

So it was settled, Temari was going to Konoha. She sighed.

"I hope I don't see Naruto there. He's nice and all but a little TOO hyper for my liking." She chuckled at the thought of the hyperactive knucklehead ninja who calls himself, Naruto. She started to pack her things and placed her fan on her back like always.

pein slammed open the door. "kakuzu sasori i have something to tell you." he said as he walked down the stairs towards them both



kakuzu looked at pein. "what is it?" he asked hoping it had something to do with bounty's.


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Naruto stood up then walked of like nothing happened. "now where could it be!" he said as he saw the noodle hut. "yes!" Naruto said as he ran towards the hut. "three bowls of ramen please!" he said moving around like a child that was sugar high.

Sasori looked up to see his leader,Pein. walk in.

"What?" He merely asked.

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She told her siblings,Kankuro and the Fifth Kazekage Gaara, where she was going. They waved her good bye and she smiled. She started to head her way to Konoha,which would take about 3 days for a regular ninja but she wasn't some regular ninja. She was a Sand Jonin and a powerful one also.

pein looked at both of them. "come with me we're going after the two tails." he said as he started for the door.


kakuzu looked at him "what about your other body's" he asked getting ready to leave.


pein looked at him. "there waiting out there for me." he said as he opened the rock door. "i plan to crush anything in my path."

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naruto ate his noodles in a record time of 10 seconds. "thank mister!" he said as he payed the man and then walked off. "now what?" Naruto asked himself.

Sasori just kept quite and followed them. He wasn't much of a talker.

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Yugito said good bye to her good friend,Killerbee, who also had a demon inside of him. So they just kind of bonded.

"Hahaha! Okay bye, Killerbee! See you tomorrow okay!?" She laughed and waved good bye. She started to walk home. Yup she "thinks" she's going to see him tomorrow. Well all of that is going to change in awhile....

(MWHAHHAHAHAHHAHHA)


pein walked outside. "when you get to cloud village wait at the west gate." he said as he jumped into the tree's.


kakuzu shrugged then like lighting jumped into the tree's also and started to head for cloud village.

Sasori followed close behind them.

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She walked into her house and locked the door. She yawned and went to her living room to read a book.

"Such a peaceful day." She said relaxed.
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"Ha! Finally!" She smirked."This should be in record time!" She was greeted by most of her friends in Konoha. Seeing as how Suna and Konoha are trying to host the second Chuunin Exams, most of Konoha knows her. She started to look around.

"Ugh. Where are you?" She asked to no one in particular.

Naruto turned a corner. "i might as well go to another village since everyone is gone." he said heading towards the gate.


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pain jumped through the woods and landed on ground.



kakuzu was at the gate. "so now what?" he said as he analyzed his surrounding's

Temari sighed and looked around.

"Damn. He's not here?" Then she was from the distance a blonde haired......oh dear. Sigh. Might as well say hi to him. So she walked up to Naruto and placed on a big smile.

"Hey Naruto!" She waved.

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Sasori landed and waited for further instructions. Normally he likes to do missions alone but this time was an exception.

Naruto turned around. "temari!" he said confused. "what are you doing here."

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pain looked at both of them. "the destruction of the cloud village starts........"



kakuzu was getting angry from waiting.

She blushed and scratched the back of her head.

"Well uh...I came here to see Shikamaru but his lazy a$$ isn't here....so yeah." She mumbled abit.

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Sasori narrowed his eyes.

"May we go now? You know I hate waiting."

finally im prepared for cloud village happenings)

Tobbi and Hidan were walking around and found sasori " hi sasori " tobi said in his usual idiot voice

Sasori glared at Tobi. He couldn't stand Tobi and his.....hyperness.

".....what are two doing here?" He said ignoring Tobi's greeting.

Kakuzu looked at tobi. "hmmm what good will you do to the destruction of cloud village?" Kakuzu said forgetting about his anger.


pain5 grabbed his left wrist with his right hand. then he violently ripped of his hand and 70 missles flew from his wrist towards the village hitting houses and stores "attack." he said as the other body's ran in the village.

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Naruto looked at Temari. "So what do you want to do?" He asked her nicely.

He saw the leader attack. He sighed and grought out a scroll. He summoned his favorite puppet, The Third Kazekage. He wrapped the puppet around his body and dashed into the village killing innocent people with his deadly needles.

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"What was that!?" She screamed. She got her ninja tools and headed out to see what's happening. She turned a corner and saw that one of her favorite stores was completely obliterated.

"What the!?"
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"Uhh I dunno. Anything I guess." She shrugged. She really just wanted to hang out with Shikamaru but Naruto's okay....now.

pain5 shot out another round of missiles into the village.

the other pain's took out innocent people.


pain7 summoned a giant centipede which started to destroy homes and crush people.


kakuzu jumped into the village and shot millions of threads into the village which peirced through the body's of anyone in his path.



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Naruto saw a ANBU messenger from cloud jump into the konoha. "hey that's a cloud ANBU!" Naruto said watching him head towards the hokage's office.

She looked up and saw the Cloud ANBu also.

"I wonder why he's here?"She had a questioning face on.

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She started to run closer to the gates and saw men in black coats with red clouds on them. Akatsuki! Why are they here? She ran closer to them.

"All of you better go away right now!" I threatened them.

Kakuzu turned to the Nibi. "HA we found her!" he said as he alerted pain.


pain looked at her then he jumped down from the building he was on. "come here." he said as he walked closer to her.



Kakuzu jumped behind her and grabbed her arm's.


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Naruto started to head for the cloud village. "come on Temari!" he yelled as he started to walk faster.

She stepped back but then she was held back. She struggled from his grasp.

"Ugh! Let go of me, you freak!" She struggled some more but it was no use. She was getting captured and she was useless. She managed to pull out a kunai from her pouch. She stabbed it into the guy's arm.

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"Right!" I started to walk faster also.

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Sasori readied his needles in-case she tried to escape.

Kakuzu laughed as he used his Iron body technique. then Kakuzu threw the Nibi across the village. "time to play cat and mouse." he said as he walked further into the village.


pain stood there. "i guess this would be a better chalange." he said as he and his other five body's walked into the city.



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Naruto walked silently through the woods. "I wonder what is happening?" he said to himself.

She landed on her feet and started to run. I need to think of a way to get these guys away from here! She started to think of ways to get rid of these missing nins. She turned left and went inside a cave. She smirked.

If they want to play cat and mouse then let's play! She quickened her pace hoping they would fall for what she has in store.
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Sasori groaned. He really wasn't in the mood for this. He followed them but at a slower pace. He knew Kakuzu could take her on but just for back-up anyway.
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"Me too." She said trying to listen to their conversation.

the kyuubi groaned. "what do you think!" he said as he flicked a piece of dust. "probably someone strong that want's something from the cloud village." he said hoping Naruto would understand.


Naruto acted like he knew what he meant. "yeah like money!"


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Kakuzu followed her trail. "a cave how....... stupid." he said as he entered it.



pain5 waited on the outside of the cave and randomly shot missiles into the village.



the other body's flowed Kakuzu.

She smirked even more. Ha! I got em were I want em! She did a hand sign and the entrance of the cave collapsed. Keeping out anybody who might interfere and keeping amybody in. Smirk. A little closer....

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"Damn. She blocked the entrance." He said sighing."Tch. Whatever." He said plainly.

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Temari looked at Naruto a little confused.

"Pardon?"

(( ahem hello im here to sigh up for the role of errrr Stone Lei no um Rock Lee there we go ))

(<_< Ya see that's why I made the request topic. Just tell me there okay? And your in.)

Rock Lee was in the middle of doing laps after his breakfast then heard missiles "huh there is trouble! i must help!" he started to sprint faster

pain5 smilled as he blasted open the opening. "how stupid of you."

Kakuzu ran towards the Nibi.



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Naruto turned towards her. "nothing." he said turning back around quickly

"Uhhh okay. If you say so." She said still confused.

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She turned around and faced them.

"Okay let's go!" She said smirking. No innocent people here so I can go all out.

(i have to leave now T.T)

Kakuzu shot his fist into the ground.


pain ran also at her along with pain7



pain5 kept guard still


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Naruto slapped his head.


kyuubi growled. "you pest!" he said as he clawed at Naruto's mind somehow.

(Bye! T_T Oi! I'm using "Is,mes,and mys XD I can't do third person!)


I raised an eyebrow. What is he doing? I thought.

Keep your guard up, Yugito. He's a strong opponent.

Well he is in the Akatsuki. But I just wonder why they're here!

They're after you of coarse. Nibi said matter-of-factly. God, she thinks she's so damn smart! It's annoying.

I smirked.Well they're in for a lot of hurt, if they want me!
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I turned over to Naruto.....again.

"Are you sure you're okay?" I asked once again.

((dude, to lazy to either message Nonye or read the 2 pages >.< did anyone talk to any of my characters yet?))

As I awoke I was so damn tired... "I hope today wouldn't be as horrible as yesterday..." I got up and got ready to go and do my ninja training.
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As I awoke I couldn't help but think of Sasuke-kun. 'If it wasn't for that damn Suigetsu I woulda,!' "Hm, what's this?" I heard about the akatsuki meeting and decided to go see what was up... 'hm, maybe I should go and get sasuke...maybe I'd find him still asleep ^^'

((dude...I can't wait till I get Sakura-chan to kill Karin-bench...))
(sorry for using ur word my dear queen.)

(Nope. But you can join Naruto and Temari eavesdropping in the Hokage's office)

Shikamaru was asleep under the cool shade of a tree, taking a nap. A while later, he yawned and sat up.

"Hmm... it's not even evening time yet... what a drag" he said, getting up slowly.

He sighed.

(finally i make it lol)

((OK and yay ^^))

I decided to go see lady Tsunade.
On my way to her office I heard some giggling and shush-ing. "Now who can that be?"
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((I'm holding off on Karin-bench till someone takes the role of Suigetsu, Juugo, and Sasuke.))

(Okay changed made. I'm now Ino,Temari,and Yugito(lolz all blondes) and VK is also Sai now.....lmfao! XD)

I woke up and went to brush my teeth. I looked myself in the mirrior and frowned.

"Ugh I look terrible!" I whined trying to brush my long beautiful hair with my fingers. I washed my face and got dressed up in my usual purple outfit with fishnet knees and elbows. I applied some makeup and a blue clip in my hair. I posed for awhile in the mirror and smiled.

"Much better! Hmmm I wonder if Shikamaru's up?" I giggled."He's probably sleeping...what a lazy bum." I giggled again and headed outside to find the lazy ninja.

(If you can't tell I was Ino right there XD)
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I heard some footsteps.

"Oh snap! Someone's here!" I whispered to Naruto.

Shikamaru lazily walked down the street looking for someone from his squad.

"Where is everyone?" he asked himself.

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Sai was sitting on top of Hokage tower's roof, drawing his pictures.

I searched for anyone.

"Oh Shika-kun?! Choji?! Ugh! Where are you guys!?" I called out for them. I wonder where everyone is? I'm surprised Naruto isn't blabbing on about something stupid. And where's billboard brow?

((O.o s-s-s-sai?!))
((and NO SHIKATEMA SHIKATEMA SHIKATEMA!!!))

As I woke up I put my teddybear away before anyone saw it. *put teddy bear in a secret place with sand death traps activated*

Shikamaru heard someone's familiar voice yell his name and sighed.

"Ino's looking for me... what a drag" I said.

He sighed again and took off heading towards Ino.

(Well duh it's going to be ShikaTema! XD That's why I'm Temari-chan!!! XD AND LMFAO!!!! Gaara-san still has his teddy bear! lolz)

I turned and saw Shika-kun coming. I squeeled.

"Shika-kun!!!!! How are you!?" I yelled happily running towards him smiling.
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I heard a loud noise from the back.

What the? That sounded like that preppy blonde haired girl who always hangs out with Shikamaru. I gasped. Maybe she knows where Shikamaru is! I got up from our hiding spot and rushed over to where that girl was.

((OH YEE ^^ and of coz! gaara would be nothing with out his teddy bear ^^ so damn cute!))

"Hello, anyone there?" I yelled hearing some more shushing.
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"Where the hell is Temari..." I said while walking though the place. Kankuro wasn't getting up anytime soon.

I turned back and saw a pink-haired girl. Oh yeah. Wasn't her name uhh Sakura? I walked over to her and smiled.

"Hey, Sakura!" I waved. I need to find Shikamaru......