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villageknucklehead
Sai felt the warmth of sakura's lips on his. He tried with all his power to speak.

"Sakura..." he said in a low mumble.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I was startled a bit but i knew it! I knew he can't be dead. "Sai?"
villageknucklehead
"Y-yeah" Sai said, still in a low, weak voice. "I came bac... for you..."
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The others heard Sakura talking that didn't seem to sad.

"Who is she... what?" Temari said.

It can't be...
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I hugged Sai.
"Oh Sai." I cried happy tears. "I love you so much."
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The others stopped and turned around.
villageknucklehead
Sai winced and yelled as best as he could.

"Don't... touch me... please."
HinataIsUltimateNinja
"Oh I'm sorry!" I let go of him and laid him down. I started to heal him again.
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The others rushed back.
villageknucklehead
The others watched in disbelief.

"B-But how?" Temari asked anybody who might answer.
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Sai slowly closed his eyes again, and gave in to the darkness.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I saw his eyes close...
"No sai.... No, not again..." I cried sad tears.
villageknucklehead
The others watched.
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Sai moaned slightly.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I sighed a sigh of relief and continued to heal him.
villageknucklehead
Everyone else watched, relieved.

Temari smiled.

He came back for her...
HinataIsUltimateNinja
*continues to heal Sai*
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I wiped away my tears and smiled. "Aw..."
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"....." I smiled also.
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"....."
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(Kakashi)

"This is a miracle...."
villageknucklehead
Shikamaru nodded.
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They still watch her heak Sai.
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"How bad is he?" Temari asked.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
"Very... It hurts him to be touched... Hopefully I can heal him enough so we can bring him to the hospital..."
villageknucklehead
"If there's still a hospital" Kiba said, looking around.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I couldn't let go of my concentration to see most of Konoha in ruins.
I began to heal Sai's other injuries.
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"I-I'll go see if there is a Hospital still around."
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"....I'll go help Hinata."
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I looked at Sakura... I was happy for her, but my heart is still sad....
villageknucklehead
Sai started stirring a little.
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Temari went to hold Shikamaru's hand, but he winced away.

"Oh, sorry!" she said, forgetting about his hand.
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"It's okay. Here..."

he got on the other side and held her hand, smiling.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I healed another part of Sai's body.
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'Oh Sakura...'
villageknucklehead
"I promise" Sai said, still mostly out of it.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
"Sai, don't speak... you need you're rest..."
villageknucklehead
Sai stayed quiet for a few moments.

"Okay, brother" Sai said.

Another long moment later, Sai slowly opened his eyes.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I was a bit startled by what Sai said....
villageknucklehead
Sai looked up and saw Sakura.

"W-What's wonng?" he asked.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
"Nothing. Everything is fine." I smiled. I was soooo happy thaqt he was alive.... I don't know what i would've done....
villageknucklehead
"Oh. Okay" Sai said.
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The others heard what Sai said too.

A brother?
HinataIsUltimateNinja
"Sai... how was your brother... You finally got to talk to him eh."
villageknucklehead
"He's... well" Sai said, looking up at the sky. "I-I can't believe it... I... seen him."

(goodnight! T.T)
HinataIsUltimateNinja
((Night T_T))

"Well, that's good right?" I healed another part of Sai's body.
villageknucklehead
"W-Well yeah, but, the fact that-t I seen him. I died, Sakura. I left t-this body and moved on, but... I made a deal, and I came back... just for you" Sai said, but it was starting to hurt too bad to talk.
Shikamaru*
(Sasori)

I grin a little bit to myself as I move my hair out of my face.

Sasori: Deidara... Your so hot headed. Attacking an entire village by yourself. Lucky for you.. I'm here.

I move my chakra strings around and make the Kazekage puppet shoot poison needles from the lower abdomen of it's body directly at Shikamaru.

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(Deidara)

I catch my breath as I survive from the close death.

Deidara: Uggh.. Took your own sweet time didn't you Sasori-Sama!

I take my right hand and my left and pierce it into my large clay pouch and start consuming clay.
villageknucklehead
Woah!

Shikamaru quickly jumped out of the way to dodge them.

WAY too close. I have a feeling this one's going to be more difficult to take care of...
Shikamaru*
(Sasori)

I smirk as I pull back on my chakra strings.

Sasori: Bad move..

I pull the needles so they break in two. Inside the needles are 4 other needles. They shoot backwards, propelled by chakra. All the needles are filled with poison.

Sasori: Theres nowhere to run now.

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(Deidara)

I watch and realize this is my move. My hands are finished with their creation as I throw a C2 bird right at the stunned Shikamaru while the needles are attacking him.

Deidara: Heh, KATSU!

I explode the bird as the needles continue their attack right at him.
villageknucklehead
The bomb exploded and Shikamaru took the impact, but still tried to get away from the needles, but still gets hit by a few and yells.

Wh-what do I do... now?
Shikamaru*
(Sasori)

I laugh a little bit to myself and watch as the shinobi staggers around.

Sasori: Heh, your dead. You see, you've just been struck by my most complex poison. If I left you alone, you'd survive 2 days. And that's with excruciating pain and numb limbs. Unfortunately for you.. I don't plan on letting you live that long. This poison is so crushing that you won't even be able to move a muscle. Heh, goodbye.. Welcome to my art.

I pull my strings and yell "IRON SAND!" The Kazekage puppet starts producing sand that is of a black color. It is spreading around as it turns into what looks to be a large needle, and a block. I send both objects hurdling towards the shinobi. The iron sand is also filled with poison.

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(Deidara)

I laugh loudly as I watch the shinobi shaking as the poison takes effects.

Deidara: --! Sasori-Sama got him! How unfortunate.. This means your end. That poison took ample time for even Sasori-Sama to conjure. Finding an antidote for it would take weeks. And it leaves no room for errors. This guy is as good as dead. He should be thanking Sasori-Sama. At least now he won't have to live 2 more days of un-imaginable pain.

villageknucklehead
It can't end like this!

SHikamaru tried with all his might to get out of the way and jump for safety, but didn't jump far.

D*MN!
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As soon as the attack was about to happen, Kiba suddenly popss up on Akamaru and quickly grabs Shikamaru and gets out of the way.
Shikamaru*
Sasori: Two more shinobi to add to my collection. Do you have any idea how I add ninjas to my collection? First I dismember the organs. Harvest and dry them out for further uses. Then I hollow out the body and infuse it with chakra and weaponry.

I move my fingers a little bit as the Kazekage puppet moves forward and chases Kiba. He opens his mouth and out comes more needles.

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Deidara: Heh, how useless..

I throw my hand out of my bag as I create a long caterpillar that extends from my hand. With it, I chase Kiba down and finally grab a hold of Shikamaru's leg.

Deidara: KATSU!
villageknucklehead
Shikamaru let out a huge yell of pain when it exploded.

"Oh, sh*t!" Kiba yelled and they hid behind a tree.
Rangiku_Matsumoto
(O_O I love you Shika! Anyway what's been happening? Sorry I've been gone for awhile! I went to a party yesterday, today I found out that I'm not failing math anymore(woo!)and school is a b!tch so I'm really truly sorry dudes. sad.gif)
villageknucklehead
(well... sai died =(





but he came back to life cuz he made a promise to his dead brother while he was dead and now while he's back, but barely, sakura's trying to save him TT.TT

and shikamaru's just got shot with sasori's poison darts and just nearly got his leg blown off. thats about it... help all three of them!)
Rangiku_Matsumoto
(Yay! Sai died! Yes. I'm just that evil. DEAL.WITH.IT. And you got it cheif!)

(Neji)
I ran over to Shikamaru.

"Shikamaru!" I looked at him then at his wound. It looks deep....
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(Ino)
I gasped. Oh no, Shikamaru! Damn it! If only I was actually useful!
villageknucklehead
"Lets get him out of here... and quick!" Kiba said urgently.
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"T-The... poison..." Shikamaru said through major pain from both the poison and his leg.

(and sai came back, but he needs help TT.TT)
Shikamaru*
(Sasori)

Sasori:... Pein is waiting for me... Can we just finish this Deidara?

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(Deidara)

Deidara: I couldn't agree more Sasori-Sama!

I reach into my pouch as I start conjuring up something. While this happens I fly upwards high into the sky.
Rangiku_Matsumoto
(Ah **** <_<)

(Neji)
I nodded my head and picked Shikamaru up slowly. I placed his arm over my shoulder.

"Don't worry, Shikamaru. I'll take you to Lady Tsunade!" I nodded my head at Kiba and dashed out to find Lady Tsunade.
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(Ino)
I watched Neji leave with Shikamaru then walked over to Sakura healing Sai.

"How's he doing, Sakura?" I asked worried.


(Wait am I still controlling Sasuke or not?)
villageknucklehead
(yeah. i think she was just controlling him for that lol)

Kiba looked at the one in the sky.

"D*mn... what's he doing?" Kiba asked, then his eyes widened. "SH*T! We have to get the hell out of here! He's blowing up the entire joint! Come on!"

Shikamaru*
(Sasori)

I smile as I watch Neji carry Shikamaru out.

Sasori:What a waste.. Theres no point trying to heal him. Not even the great Tsunade can make progress with him now. This poison crushes and destroys proteans and invades vital organs as well as closes chakra points. He's as good as dead. His lungs are probably already half-useless. He's probably having trouble breathing as we speak.

I look at Kiba trying to escape and mutter "Oh no you don't". I start moving my fingers as the Kazekage puppet raises both iron sand objects. "Satetsu Kaiho (Iron Sand World Order)"! I suddenly create an expanding sphere of spikes as they rain down all around a 100m radius. Kiba is trapped inside it. What makes this jutsu even more devastating is the fact that touching the iron sand can easily cut you and inject poison as it is drenched with the venom.

Sasori: Your fate.. Is sealed.

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(Deidara)

I continue eating clay with my hand for this devastating jutsu.


Rangiku_Matsumoto
(Thought so.)

(Ino)
"WHAT!?" I yelled in disbelief.
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(Neji)
I heaed towards the hospital but found Lady Tsunade at the front doors.

"Lady Tsunade!" I called out.
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(Tsunade)
"What is it-" I gasped when I saw Shikamaru's wounds."Iniside now!" I ran inside.
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(Neji)
I followed.

"Don't worry, Shikamaru. You'll be alright now." I hope....
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(Sasuke)
I narrowed my eyes.

"And where exactly do you plan on leaving to!?" I asked Kiba."We can't just leave everyone to their death!" I protested. I then saw the black sand. I covered my mouth and drawed back my sword. Sh!t! What now!?
Shikamaru*
((XD Sasuke and Kiba are trapped in Iron World now :| I feel so god damn evil))
Rangiku_Matsumoto
(Well you are darlin! XD Mr. Puppet Master and Mr. Bomb-o-maniac!)
villageknucklehead
Kiba gritted his teeth and looked around.

"Damm*t!" Kiba yelled. "Where's Itachi when you need him. He may know something to stop this!"
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"Here. Lets take Sai to the hospital!" Temari told Ino and Sakura. "It's not safe here!"
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Shikamaru started breathign hard and gritting his teeth from the pain.
Shikamaru*
I use my Kazekage puppet to attack Kiba as I force it to release a razor sharp sword from it's left hand. Once again-- Drenched with poison.

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(Deidara)

I finally pull my hand out of my pouch as I have just created what looks to be a small clay statue.

Deidara:
Say hello... To my C3 bomb. This one bomb can level an entire Village.. Hell, a forest if need be.

I throw the statue over the bird as I use my jutsu to make it about 30x larger.

Deidara: Hmph, at this size and with this much Chakra... Feel free to breath as much fire as you wish against it. Because of it's size and how unstable it is. You'll simply cause the explosion to set off sooner.

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