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HinataIsUltimateNinja
((tongue.gif welp I am Kakashi! hear me roar! lolz))
villageknucklehead
(-_-")

Sai kept watching him.

Hmm... what should I do?
HinataIsUltimateNinja
(Kakashi)

"Now If I can aim the kunai bombs precisely...."
*uses the sharingan eye*
Shikamaru*
((Hinata :| I'm 800m above you. Do you have any idea how high that is? I don't think Kakashi is nowhere able to throw that high))
HinataIsUltimateNinja
((WHO said he himself is throwing it))
Shikamaru*
I look down at the shinobi below me. Finally I smirk. Not because he is so far away from me. But because he fell right into my trap.

Deidara: Sorry kid, I've been playing with you this whole time.

Around Sai is 100's of Aphids, they are all over his body as many of them sink into his skin and latch on. Many of them are on his ink bird as well.

Deidara: Do you remember when I did this?

(A flashback scene occurs)

QUOTE
I fly away from the attacking Lion as it manages to take a bite off my clay bird. However, it ends up dropping to the ground. With that opening, I reach my hand out from my clay bag and throw what looks to be a miniature sphere clay ball.

Deidara: KATSU!

From out of the ball spawns many small critters. Aphids, flies, spiders and caterpillars. Some fall into the village and others elsewhere in the sky.

Deidara: Hmph! Perfect.


Deidara: Heh, I wasn't aiming for the village of Konoha at all. The whole time I had planned to attach a female aphid to your body in hopes of it rapidly reproducing near your body and on your body without you noticing. Following this, the second part of my plan was to reach an altitude where there is no hope of you getting any real help, not only that. A replacement jutsu is impossible.

I smirk with a wide grin as I finally scream;

Deidara: THIS IS THE END! KATSU!

A large C2 explosion is seen as all 400 of the mini aphids attached and in Sai's skin explode.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
(Kakashi)

'Hopefully that boy has a transmitter and reciever'
"Sai, Sai can you hear me?"
Shikamaru*
I am pleased with myself as I watch the body of Sai drop from an altitude of approximately 550m above sea level.

Deidara: Stage 1.. Complete.
villageknucklehead
"Sakur...a..." Sai said as he closed his eyes and continued falling. "I'm... s-sorr...y..."
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"Kiba! Go catch him!" Temmari yelled as she took out her fan and blew it a few times to try and slowl him down. At the same time, Kiba and Akamaru jump off the top of a tree and catch him.
Shikamaru*
I slowly begin to make my decent down to about 300m above sea level.

Deidara: Now that I have that pest out of the way. This village is MINE.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I had a cold chill rushed down my spine as I waited.
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(Kakashi)

"No SAI!"
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"Oh my god! Look Sai's falling!"
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I tried gathering my sand to break his fall.
Shikamaru*
I smirk as I watch the villagers scurry around to catch their fallen shinobi.

Deidara: What a tear jerker.. How sad, oh well! Theres no point, it would take a true medical genius to make any progress with the kid, the explosion would have caused 3rd degree burns all across his body. Not to mention punctured vital organs and closed chakra points. Even if you saved him; he'd been hospitalized for weeks. Unfortunately for Konoha.. Time is running short--

villageknucklehead
Kiba landed on the ground and easily sat Sai down on the ground.
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Temari and Shikamaru ran to him.

"Sai!" Shikamaru said, skidding on his knees, sitting beside Sai, looking at him.

"Kakashi Senei. How bad does it look?" Temari asked, already knowing the answer.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
(Kakashi)

"Bad, really really bad..."
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"Where's Sakura, or Lady Tsunade?!"
Shikamaru*
I look down with my robotic eye and realize many people are gathered around the fallen shinobi. I use this time to throw my hand into my pouch.

Deidara: Fools... Death is an accepted part of a shinobi's life. Never turn your back on a battle.

Deidara creates 8 pelican birds and sends them down towards Konoha. 2 to the North. 2 to the West. 2 to the East. 2 To the South.

Deidara: KATSU!

((Lol, I feel so evil XD))
villageknucklehead
(you're so mean!!! T.T)

They all ducked from the explosions.

"What the hell!?" Shikamaru yelled angrily, then looking up. "SH*T!!"
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"D*MN! Last night I seen her walking towards Sai's house" Kiba said. "And I don't know where Lady Tsunade is."
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"Someone needs to go find someone... NOW!" Shikamaru yelled.
Shikamaru*
Deidara: Still haven't learned your lesson it seems... How sad. Heh, oh well.

I conjure up some more critters as I send them down into Konoha village.

Deidara:
KATSU!
villageknucklehead
"That's it!" Shikamaru yelled and ran up and tried doing

"Shadow Possession Jutsu!" Shikamaru yelled.

Since there's so much smoke around, maybe that'll create enough shadow to reach him!

It started working as Shikamaru pushed it as hard as he could.
Shikamaru*
Deidara: D-damn it! He's got me!
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I felt another chill. "I'm sorry sai!"
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(Kakashi)

"Hinata! go get Sakura!"
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"Alright Kakashi sensei!" I ran towards Sai's house.
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"Good! I'll make a barrier to keep away the explosions!" I tried to conjeur up a wall to protect the citizens.
villageknucklehead
Shikamaru lifted his hands out to the side and pulled out a kunai fromm his pouch.
Shikamaru*
I am forced to reach into my pouch and pull out a kunai as well.
villageknucklehead
Self sacrifice if that's what it takes!

Shikamaru lifted his kunai and stabbed himself in the center of his left hand, where the guy's mouth would be and twisted it in circles. He clenched his teeth shut.

See if he's really in my control before I actually do somethign more drastic!
Shikamaru*
(Deidara)

I find myself shooting the kunai right at my left hand. Closing my eyes and clenching my teeth I hope for the best.

Deidara: SH*T!

I open my eyes to find that I'm still alive however. Forcing my hand back is the kunai of another shinobi.. Well, not exactly a shinobi. But a puppet.

Deidara: GOD DAMN IT SASORI-SAMA! Took you long enough!

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(Sasori)

I use my chakra strings to pull away the 3rd Kazekage puppet. My face remains calm and melachony.

Sasori: Sorry to keep you waiting Deidara..

((OMGG I gtg! T_T Just as soon as this fight got good. We can keep going tommorow?))
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I ran towards where the others might be.
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I ran and ran.
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(Kakashi)

"Sai how are you feeling?"

'Cmon shikamaru... I know you can beat this guy!'
Shikamaru*
((>_< I gtg guys. Sooo sorry =[))
villageknucklehead
(no, we're leaving your a**!! XD JK but the characters in the fight can stay, but we're taking the ones on the sideline)

(where'd you get neck?)

Sai couldn't talk.
Shikamaru*
((Whoops! LOL, I read neck instead of left hand XD))

((Byyeee guys))
villageknucklehead
(bye dude)

Sai couln't talk as he grew weaker.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
((bwye T_T *glompz*))

"Sai?! Naruto?! INO?! ANYONE?!" I ran into town.
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I was close to Sai's house.
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I tried to get some villagers to safety.
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(Karin)

"Hey Sasuke-kun. do you think i can."
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(Kakashi)

"Stay with me Sai..."
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I smirked. "Hey, go ahead."
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(Karin)

"Sai-kun! Cmon bite me, it will help heal you!" I said as I rolled up one of my sleeves.
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I saw Sai was nowhere so I thought he might be at the gates.
villageknucklehead
Sai's eyes started closing slowly.
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"Damm*t!" Temari said, getting up and pacing.
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"Sai!" Kiba said.

Damm*t!!
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I saw the others gathered... but where's Sai? "SAI!"
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I reached Sai's house but no one was home...
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(Kakashi)

"No sai."
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I pushed everyone out of my way. "Sai." I saw he was hurt so i kneeled beside him and tried to heal him.
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'Sakura'
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"Sai, speak to me..."
villageknucklehead
Sai opened his eyes a tiny bit when he heard Sakura.

"S-Sakur-ra..." he said in a weak voice. I... l-love.... you..."

Sai's body went limp.
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Everyone watched sorrowfully as a fellow ninja and friend, dying, not knowing anything that could help him.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
"Sai i love you but you're not going to die!" I healed him as fast as i could...
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I ran back to see Sakura back with the others... and Sai dying...
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I hung my head in sorrow and respect.
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'Sai you are a good man.' I hung my head also.
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Karin and Kakashi both hung their heads.
villageknucklehead
(*cries*

seriously)

Sai doesn't respond to anything.
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Temari hung her head.
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Kiba hung his head and Akamaru bowed and stayed like he was.
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Shikamaru hung his head.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
I began to cry. "No sai... don't leave me... I love you too much... This can't happen." my tears fell on Sai.
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I hung my head like the others.
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"..."
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'Poor Sakura...'
villageknucklehead
S-Sakura... I'm so sorry. Temari thought.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
"Please Sai..." I cried and as the tears fell i tried to heal him the best i could.
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'Sakura... I'm sorry...'
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"..."
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I wanted to be by her side, but i didn't think it was the best descision right now...
villageknucklehead
*The smoke starts to clear and a ray of sunshine shines on Sai*

(aww. i can just picture that T.T)

"I-It was like he was holding on just long enough to tell Sakura he loved her" Temari said in a low, sorrowful voice.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
"Sai..." I stopped. There was nothing else I could do then just to hug him and cry. "I love you... I love you so much Sai..." I gave him one last kiss.
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I started to cry to.
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"He was a good man."
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'Sakura...'

-edit-

((i just realized... Romeo and Juliet!))
villageknucklehead
(O.O NO!!)

They all looked down with their eyes closed.
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"He was a good buddy to be with" Kiba said, then had to clenchhis teeth together.
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Temari started crying a little too.
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The sunshine then disappeared off of him.

(where's kakashi?)
HinataIsUltimateNinja
(Kakashi)

I laid a hand on Sakura....
"Cmon Sakura."
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"No, I'm never leaving Sai..." I said through my tears.
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I cried.
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"He was a good commrade."
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"I didn't know him that much but he seemed like the type who will be there."
villageknucklehead
Sai... somewheres....

*everyone is fading in the distance as everything gets whiter*

Where am I? Or better yet... what am I?

Is that me? With people... gathered around me? Crying? And... Sakura. I c-can't leave her. Please.


(okay now, this goes with it and f you want to uderstand the next part, read or listen to the lyrics to this song, cuz i don't feel like translating it right now:

afterlife- avenged sevenfold

mostly in the chorus if you don't want to read it all)

*the sunshine starts peaking through again*
HinataIsUltimateNinja
((T_T the lyrics won't load but i grasp ur point with that))

"Sai..." I held him close."I love you... i love you so much..." I kept on crying.
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"S-sakura..." I kept crying also.
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I had nothing else to say...
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"He's in a better place now."
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(Kakashi)

"Cmon Sakura..."
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"..."
villageknucklehead
(okay, but this is all you have to know:

I don't belong here, I gotta move on dear
escape from this afterlife
’Cause this time I'm right to move on and on,
far away from here)

*the sunlight disappears off of him once again*
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The others watch, still saddened and sorowful.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
Sakura keeps crying and holding Sai as she tells him she loves him so. Kakashi tries to get Sakura to let go. The others just stood by in sorrow and watched.
villageknucklehead
Sai's eyes open very slightly, just enough for him to see through them a tiny bit.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
(Kakashi)

"Cmon Sakura... you gotta let go..."
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"No! I am not leaving Sai!"
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(Kakashi)

"You learned all this when you started ninja training. all shinobi put their lives at risk and some of them never come back..."
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"I know that, but I am not leaving Sai!" I said through tears as i kept telling Sai i love him so.
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The others bowed their heads to show their respects while Hinata cries, Gaara tries to speak a few words of kindness while Sasuke tries to help.
villageknucklehead
Sai wanted to speak, but couldn't.

Am I still dead? They're still crying over me. Everyone... paying their respects. I am still dead...

Sai kept trying to speak, but no sound would come out and his mouth wouldn't move to allow him to.
HinataIsUltimateNinja
"Sai..." I kissed him again but his lips didn't feel lifeless like before...
'No way... is he alive?! OMG! Sai!'
CHA! I KNOW SAI COULDN'T DIE LIKE THAT!
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(Kakashi)

"Let's go guys, I think she needs to be alone for a while."
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