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I tried to listen to his Sasuke's side of the story.
"well i he kept finding me because he didnt know my real purpose of which i cannot tell, you call it betrayal i call it a risky mission i needed power and i would do everything for it...in my mission i also obtain wisdom as well and some tricks" he said then sighed
Shikamaru studied his face for a moment.
"Come back to the village with us" Shikamaru finally said.
"Come back to the village with us" Shikamaru finally said.
He looked shocked "what.... yea fine..." he got up
Kiba looked annoyed and narrowed his eyes.
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Shikamaru watched every move as Sasuke moved.
"Wait" he said.
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Both Sai and Kiba looked confused for a moment.
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Shikamaru watched every move as Sasuke moved.
"Wait" he said.
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Both Sai and Kiba looked confused for a moment.
He stopped "....what" he looked around
I looked at Shikamaru confused. What the?
((k-kiba!!!!!!))
"...." I joined everyone in watching shikamaru.
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"Damn this blasted work." I used sand coffin on the work.
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((O.o do we give Karin a little screen time yet? she is so useless i have nothin for her to do
))
"...." I joined everyone in watching shikamaru.
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"Damn this blasted work." I used sand coffin on the work.
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((O.o do we give Karin a little screen time yet? she is so useless i have nothin for her to do
))
Shikamaru thought of a way to put this.
"Before we go... give me all you weapons" he said.
"Before we go... give me all you weapons" he said.
(She should be with Sasuke-kun then)
He glared at him for a second "even if i wanted to attack i wouldnt need them" he handed him the two kusanagi swords and the kunais,wire,shuriken,and bombs
((okey....KIBA!!!!!!!! *glompz* XD))
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I decided to see where everyone was.
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I decided to see what Sasuke was up to.
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I decided to see where everyone was.
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I decided to see what Sasuke was up to.
My eyes widen at his weapons. Why does he need for all of those weapons?
(O_O Sakura's not going goo-goo eyes on Sasuke-kun! O.O)
(O_O Sakura's not going goo-goo eyes on Sasuke-kun! O.O)
Shikamaru took the weapons.
"It's not that really" he said. "It's just in case the villagers wonder why we are accepting a missing nin back into the village if they see you with weapons. This way, they may think that we are bringing you in. This way will be safer for all of us. And that's why, when we get to the gates of the village, we are going to act like guards. Do you see?"
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Kiba looked at them, not speaking, and so did Sai.
"It's not that really" he said. "It's just in case the villagers wonder why we are accepting a missing nin back into the village if they see you with weapons. This way, they may think that we are bringing you in. This way will be safer for all of us. And that's why, when we get to the gates of the village, we are going to act like guards. Do you see?"
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Kiba looked at them, not speaking, and so did Sai.
Oh nice plan Shikamaru! I thought in my mind.
"oh so im a prisoner basically" he pouts "whatever.."
You can think of it like that" Shikamaru said, smirking, "but don't worry. First we are going to see how the people back in the village will react. If they don't think much, then we'll go from there."
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Kiba smirked.
Nice thinking Shikamaru!
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Kiba smirked.
Nice thinking Shikamaru!
I smiled.Woo! Go Shika-kun!
"Well then I guess we should go now."
"Well then I guess we should go now."
He smirked " you're alright with me Shikamaru" he smiled abit
Shikamaru smirked.
"You ready, Sasuke?" Shikamaru asked.
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Kiba, Akamaru, and Sai got ready to go.
"You ready, Sasuke?" Shikamaru asked.
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Kiba, Akamaru, and Sai got ready to go.
I walked next to Kiba and Akamaru.
"yea im ready" he sighed "lets get on with it"
Shikamaru nodded and took off through the woods, still slowly.
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Sai followed.
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"Huh, I sort of expected a little brawl" Kiba said a little dissappointed.
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Sai followed.
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"Huh, I sort of expected a little brawl" Kiba said a little dissappointed.
I giggled at Kiba's comment.
"Yeah. I thought so also." I agreed with him.
(I'll be Deidara. O_o What's up with me and blondes?!)
"Yeah. I thought so also." I agreed with him.
(I'll be Deidara. O_o What's up with me and blondes?!)
((XP i didn't know! -sigh- u guys post while i am writing other stuff))
*goess googoo eyes for sasuke.*
((happy? idk.. sheesh i didn't even know we had a sasuke!))
*goess googoo eyes for sasuke.*
((happy? idk.. sheesh i didn't even know we had a sasuke!))
(holy ****)
(what's happening?)
(and i have a web site where you can get all of the characters jutsu)
(SITE FOR ALL JUTSU:click here)
(what's happening?)
(and i have a web site where you can get all of the characters jutsu)
(SITE FOR ALL JUTSU:click here)
(hmm where to start? Uhh okay once the Akatsuki left, Tsunade treated Shikamaru and now he's fine. Sasuke arrived and him and Tsunade had a small brawl. Sasuke said that he had info about the Akatsuki and they're little plan to capture Naruto. So Sasuke left into the forest and Ino,Kiba,Akamaru,Sai,and Shika followed him. Now they're bringing him back. I think that's about it oh and I'm Dei-Dei 
and Yes Sarah we have a Sasuke)
and Yes Sarah we have a Sasuke)
He smirked at Kiba then took a deep breath " oh and Tsunade better not yell ive had enough already"
"Well that's one thing we have no control over" Shikamaru said. "So don't do nothing if she does, cause it's not our fault. If she does, Ino, Kiba, Sai, take Sasuke outside and let me talk to Lady Tsunade? Okay?"
I nodded at Shikamaru.
"Okay."
"Okay."
((woot!))
*tries not to drool*
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I ended up in Konoha.... "great..."
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"Sasuke! where are you?!"
((damn people. join the FCs! man... the fcs are dyin! and i just made a suigetsu one like a week or so ago!))
*tries not to drool*
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I ended up in Konoha.... "great..."
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"Sasuke! where are you?!"
((damn people. join the FCs! man... the fcs are dyin! and i just made a suigetsu one like a week or so ago!))
(okay thanks)
Kakuzu looked at Pain. "Now that we have the Kyuubi what else is left to do?" He asked thinking.
Pain looked at passed out Naruto. "I've heard that someone is going to rat out on us." Pain said still looking at Naruto.
Kakuzu clenched his fists. "who?"
Pain looked at Kakuzu. "Uchiha, Sasuke." he said crossing his arms.
"Uchiha?" Kakuzu said stunned. "i could have guessed."
Pain looked at Kakuzu. "I'm going to use my transformation jutsu to change you into Asuma Sarutobi. You will act as a spy. no one will notice since Asuma hasn't been heard from in five weeks." Pain said smiling.
Kakuzu slowly smiled.
Kakuzu looked at Pain. "Now that we have the Kyuubi what else is left to do?" He asked thinking.
Pain looked at passed out Naruto. "I've heard that someone is going to rat out on us." Pain said still looking at Naruto.
Kakuzu clenched his fists. "who?"
Pain looked at Kakuzu. "Uchiha, Sasuke." he said crossing his arms.
"Uchiha?" Kakuzu said stunned. "i could have guessed."
Pain looked at Kakuzu. "I'm going to use my transformation jutsu to change you into Asuma Sarutobi. You will act as a spy. no one will notice since Asuma hasn't been heard from in five weeks." Pain said smiling.
Kakuzu slowly smiled.
(RPs are better)
(Tsunade)
I looked over at the entrance and saw Gaara.
"Kazekage Gaara? Why are you here?"I asked walking up to him.
(Tsunade)
I looked over at the entrance and saw Gaara.
"Kazekage Gaara? Why are you here?"I asked walking up to him.
He sighed "hmmm" he looked back then shrugged "...so what to do now"
"We're here" Shikamaru said, and seen Lady Tsunade and... Gaara?
He stopped st the gate, making sure Sasuke was withitn sfe proximity of him.
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Kiba and Sai stopped also.
He stopped st the gate, making sure Sasuke was withitn sfe proximity of him.
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Kiba and Sai stopped also.
*Shōten no Jutsu!!*(Shapeshifting Technique) Pain yelled as Kakuzu slowly turned into Asuma.
Kakuzu smiled. "HAHAHA! i'm a clone of Asuma andmy voice is even the same as his." He said as he was about to walk out the door.
"at whatever it takes stop Sasuke." Pain said before Kakuzu walked out the door.
Kakuzu smiled. "HAHAHA! i'm a clone of Asuma andmy voice is even the same as his." He said as he was about to walk out the door.
"at whatever it takes stop Sasuke." Pain said before Kakuzu walked out the door.
"I son't know..But it's surely can't be worse over here."
((such an emo deep voice...))
((such an emo deep voice...))
(Ino)
I stopped also and gulped.
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(Tsunade)
I turned back to the gates and saw Shikamaru.
"Excuse me,Gaara-san."I walked over to Shikamaru."So....any luck?"
I stopped also and gulped.
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(Tsunade)
I turned back to the gates and saw Shikamaru.
"Excuse me,Gaara-san."I walked over to Shikamaru."So....any luck?"
Shikamaru looked back at Sasuke and took a step to the side and held up his weapons.
Please, don't Lady Tsunade...
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Kiba watched.
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Sai jumped up in the air and disappeared.
Please, don't Lady Tsunade...
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Kiba watched.
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Sai jumped up in the air and disappeared.
Kakuzu walked to konoha gates as Asuma. "I'll be there in seconds." He said to himself thinking of the bounty for Sasuke.
My eyes widen at the sight of Sasuke.
"What's he doing here!?"I demanded.
"What's he doing here!?"I demanded.
Shikamaru closed his eyes, sighed, and looked back at Ino and Kiba, then looked at Sasuke, a sign to get ready to have to take him away
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"Lady Tsunade, he has information to give us, and a helping hand" shikamaru said.
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"Lady Tsunade, he has information to give us, and a helping hand" shikamaru said.
"S-sasuke..." I whispered to myself..
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"Whatever." I just followed.
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"Sasuke?" I was walking around not knowing where he was...
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"Whatever." I just followed.
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"Sasuke?" I was walking around not knowing where he was...
Kakuzu/Asuma landed at the konoha gates in front of everyone. "hey." he said as he brushed off some dirt.
He looked at Sakura who look liked she had a dead puppy "....." he looked away then looked at the others " so where to next"
Then he looked at Asuma "he..Asuma?heh i bet Shikamaru would be happy to see you"
Then he looked at Asuma "he..Asuma?heh i bet Shikamaru would be happy to see you"
I huffed and started to think. I glared at Sasuke then looked at Shikamaru. I sighed.
"Fine. But one of you will have to be with him and watch him all the time. If he does the slightest thing to betray us again.....kill him." I said boldy."After this Akatsuki business is over, he'll be on trial." I said finally.
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(Ino)
"Wow. Lady Tsunade was merciful...on Sasuke!? Whoa!" I said astonished.
"Fine. But one of you will have to be with him and watch him all the time. If he does the slightest thing to betray us again.....kill him." I said boldy."After this Akatsuki business is over, he'll be on trial." I said finally.
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(Ino)
"Wow. Lady Tsunade was merciful...on Sasuke!? Whoa!" I said astonished.
-sigh- I was torn... i think. "I-I'll do it." I said a bit low.
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"....sasuke..."
((damn karin is useless... at least Sakura has some emotional turmoil!))
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"....sasuke..."
((damn karin is useless... at least Sakura has some emotional turmoil!))
(didn't asuma die?)
(no this is Naruto redone (remake) everyone is alive ^^)
(( well even though itachi isnt dead im keeping my sharingan))
He pouted "yea you're going easy on me wow..." he smirked
He pouted "yea you're going easy on me wow..." he smirked
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