Ok.... this would be my latest poem.. and... its bad.. -_- thats probably coz i did it during an exam.. XD lol.. anywayz.. tell me what ya think..


Bleeding Heart

Though you have gone you still remain,
For in my dreams you dwell,
The past I wish just to forgo,
Putting me back in Hell..

You've made me feel that my life has ended,
That the Sun will never shine,
For all you ever left me with,
Was this bleeding heart of mine...

There's still one thing, I must say true,
that's my life you made it hard,
And all along now it was you,
The reason to my bleeding heart...

Nice one Meira...keep on writing !

Wow!!Good,it's some talent on here!!

yay for depressing poems

see, now where would you get the inspiration if it wasnt for the whole male population being complete a*******?

Yeah that is true.

lol.. infer... XD and thanx cutie.. ^^

Yah welcome!

*thumbs up*
you've done it once again oneechan

lol.. thanx ray... though.. i still think that its not that good.. -_-

if u dont think its good, then go ahead and write a better one Meira ^^

=O damn... you're right mouri... =3 i shall start a new one.. ^^ but i get inspiration during weird times... like when i brush my teeth.... -_- oh well..

its really good I like that u made it have stanzas most people dont