Your lips so red
Your eyes dark hazel
The laughter maddens me
I am yours, enthralled.

You pull my leash
And I follow, silently
I live for you
Into death, as well.

Yet here I’m cast
Abandoned, disowned and forgotten
A toy you’ve dropped
A will you’ve taken.

So here I lie
Writing my last poem
Waiting for pain’s end
While I gently bleed.

oh that was... touching?
very good anyway

Thnx. I think I do emo poems better.

Then do that we will be waiting for

Bai o.0~ issit u lolz long time never see u in forums

nice poem anyway

An eternity passed by
A fire long cold
Wounds long scabbed over
The heart still bleeds.



@Piper: I LIVE

nice addition to the poem is there gonna be BUT.....


@Bai : been wondering where have you been

Hi, I like your first poem, When I gently bleed, since it has more emotional impact and I visualise better. Hope to read more of your work.