She made the angels jealous with her smile
No man could crush her spirit.
But from jealously comes actions that are vile,
And so heavens doors creaked so loud you could hear it.

I wish I could have known that tragic day
That windy Autumn when she was taken.
Their were many 'I love you's' left to say,
But i guess some things are best forsaken.

Though do not pity me
That is not what i want.
I want you to have this memory,
Of the angel lost souls sought.

Style is: Monody

yeppers lol opened up my little book and decided to type up the first one on the first page ^^ what do you think?

That's really nice. I like it a lot. Great work.

Yeah Matt good job

Thxs i made it for my GF's sister that died. Im not really sure how exactly she died since she really isn't ready to talk about it but she did describe her to me. So i wrote this and it made her cry and it even got posted on my school's top poems of the week well ty you all

seriously this poem is good

Yeah keep this stuff up Matt and that sucks man im sorry

lol 'seriously' mouri, what you lied on my other poems but ty you anyway

and thxs kyuubi i might type up the next poem i have on the next page......

It's one of the best poems I have ever read!!!!! I write poems and that is really good!!!

ahhh so many sorrows are in this poem.
u are a good poet hotagi.
keep it up

lol thxs yoshichu and sasukelover999 ^^ and yeah i need to find something and just stick with it XD i pick up so many projects that i start to forget one and end up coming back to it. (writing stories, writing poems, making sigs, drawing, creating inventions, sculpting (omg i love to do this now XD) putting music together to make a beat, painting) i love art lol anything art, don't know why i just gahh can't explain it but my teacher says im doing to many 'art projects' and that if i don't pick one and stick to it i'll never succeed....and of course she thinks i should stick with sculpting/writing poems but it so hard to just stop everything else *sigh*.....

hey the name's matt and im addicted to art XD i can soo see someone saying that at a rehab circle XD

It shows good skill.

Sometimes, emotion writes the poem, sometimes the mind. I know I go through periods of great imagination, and great draughts. Keep writting when you're in the mood. It'll usually all come.

It is so sad... you captured the essence of your friend's death. How about showing more from your little book?

wow.....rly rly good...so....emotional....:]

matt more more!!!!!^-^

Hotagi thats really good i like how u express ur feelings more openly in poem

... did you just call him hotagi?

wow...red alert... anyway thats good Matty when i grow up i wanna be just like you except still sexy

... lol i think he jsut complimented and dissed you XD

well err its kinda complicated