Tell me what you think.
Wings drawing courtesy of Taylorforsrsly (http://taylorforsrsly.deviantart.com/)

That's pretty good, nice job. I like the first 2 lines best.

YAY 4 Flatty the flasher!!
ish GOOD!! REALLY GOOD....(better than mine..T__T) write more or next time we're at towers i'll make you do DDR on the hardest level...MWHAHAHAHAH...

wow, never knew you wrote poems
hikari
its not better than yours
its equal as my opinion
post some of yours

That's so awesome. great job!

this poem is really deep!!!!

i love this piece of work

Thank you so much for your comments! nice to know im not poetry doomed
*smiles*

Thanks again

Sabercute

Overall, with or without the image given, your words does fire up my imagination... so it's simple and straightforward, so the message is carried across...erm, just one typo though, committed and not commited...