WELL! since you guys wont visit my poem section i'll just post it as a new topic *humph* lol well here it is:

Death At My Door

I sit upon a chair as my house is echoed by the eerie sound of a clock
Tick-Tock Is all I hear as I wait for the black chariot and my hooded friend to arrive Tick-Tock
My heart has stop beating and my breath comes out into an icy mist in the dreaded cold
I huddle to myself trying to keep warm as I wait for my friend to come and take my willing soul
Waiting is all I seem to do, I waited long enough for the made up light that never came
Waited for the so called emotion called love from my family and to be treated the same
But not this time I'm going to take action instead of sitting still like a statue
Tonight I'm giving my soul to the only person that thought it had any value
A smile crosses my face and a small icy tear falls to the ground and shatters
Finding comfort that when I'm gone they will finally be happy, that i never mattered
My heart starts to beat as I hear the phone, slowly i answer and find out it's my family
Saying they were sorry and that they wanted to change, saying....they loved me
My emotion turned into happiness and alive instead of dead and hate
I smile, as a hand is placed upon my shoulder and i fall into the darkness thinking 'there love was to late'

its sad ;__; but really good
WAAAAAAY better than mine..

lol nah my poems suck <_< your are WAY better than mine and like im so suprised i feel like me and you are the only ones that visits this section anymore T_T truly sad indeed T_T

sad:(

but awesome!!!!!^-^

gud work!!!!!

really i thought this poem was stupid lol come on guys i want the truth if it sucks it sucks lol dont beat around the bush thats why i miss para she would tell me straight up lol

The beginning was kind of hard to get into for me.

and you don't need to hear about form or anything, you already know about it

but, as always, the emotion is ever present. And the poem was very sad.

hmmm....6/10 7/10?

WOOT! finally lol yes i know though people havent commenteded on my final curtain call poem in my poem section ORRRRRRRR um um um darn forgot the name lol

I though that the first part was kinda confusing but as i kept reading it got really good!!!

it looked to long fo rme to read, but im sure it was good. lol im such a lazybutt

lol then why did you comment and thank you Sasukelover9999 ^^

i have alot of them in my black little notebook (o yeah i totally turned into para at school xD) hmm i'll probably start posting them again ^^