This is somthing i wrote one night when i was in a sad mood

The damage done to this young child
Was always said to be just mild

Pain covered up with laughter and mirth
threat of broken spirit was there since her birth

She's tried to find her once happy center
but always ends up the saddest relenter

Many things have happened to help break her spirit
this poem's like a sad song, just part of the lyrics

like a dying star once shining so bright
her spirit dies out like a fire at night

The will of fire has died in this young child
the damage done to her spirit was never just mild

o dat was gud rely sad doh

[[color="#FF8C00"][/color] thank ya

thank ya

thank ya

lolz welcome!!!!!^-^

poor child! I MUST HUGGLE YOU!!!!!

it was pretty good

lolz kasu!!!!

i'm the child WTF

Nice poem Tails.

Sad though

Nice. Beware of the Huggles though.....They murder children. But It was really Good.

I'm gonna run now.

DID I HEAR ZE SAY HE WANTED A SUPERMEGAHUGGLE? OK THEN!!! *huggles Ze*


and yes Tails, i know your that child, meaning I gave you a huggle!!! be happy.

IT BURNS!!! AHHH!!! OMG!!!! .......*Dies* WTH?

Damn Evil SUPERMEGAHUGGLES...... Kasu >_>

O_o umm....that wasn't supposed to happen....

Nice Response. Usually when I die I get Kicked or thrown into the water, and continue dying/drowning. XDD

......

*kicks Ze's dead body*

sorry, its a thing I do..first I act shocked and concerned, then I turn around and kick people

lol kasu

nice poem... good job tails-chan... >.<

Nicely done, the construction is good.