I walk passed u with a tear in my eye,yet u seem to have nothing to hide,
im amazed how cold you've gotten to resist my eyes,i feel like i want to
cry,your love for me is fading....far far away......i can feel it now....its just
washing away.....i look at u with a big smile on my face,but he seems that
hes not falling from grace,days later u start to ignore me....i feel sorrow
filling my body....your love for me is fading....fading far away....you wer
my special thing,my treasure to care.
I start to cry,when u apear in my face,yet u dont bother to raise my head
to tell me its going to be ok,i get mad,but i feel so empty,without you my love
i cant tell the meaning of grace...you love is fading...fading far far away....
why can't i touch you,im falling from grace,everytime i see u cold,i tend to break
dont and feel so old....why is this?...did i do somehting wrong?...why won't you tell me
with your face of bold,you ignore me,and u seem to not care....one day you will be sorry
that im not there,here i lay with a gun in my face,saying "Lord,i fell far down from grace"
i close my eyes and whisper my words,that ur love for me is fading far far away...
Once you notice me,the last hting you'll see,is my wonrnout body,laying down asleep.

sad but good!!! Do you always write sad poems or does it just depends on the mood you're in at the moment?

Well,mostly sad ones since my life is no good,but yea,i do make alot of sad ones
^^

I really love the way you write your poems. They're captivating and deep. It's awesome. I don't know how well you do in the professional realm, because your poetry is written differently. A good editor could probably separate the stanza and make it look nice and it might do well though. I'm actually going to probably be getting my stuff published soon. I don't know, just thought I'd say that I really like your stuff.

very nice poem!!! like para said its deep

Thank You Guys Veary Much!
^^
Ill Try To Do Better,it was just a moment i felt in life so i tried

wow thats really good!!! made me cry *wipes tears*

i luv ur poem it deep and feeled with emotion and very sad
I cant wait 2 read ur other poems

lol that girl said she cried o.o XD

didnt like it

i dont like whiny poems and when they feel sorry for themselves

i like sick twisted killing stuff