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gokenshadow
I just jumped of a cliff,
And no, it's not a myth,
My conscience went bye bye,
I now begin to fly,
Straight down from a blue sky.

I'm having second thoughts,
About my stupid plots,
I'm now afraid of dying,
I can't be saved from flying,
Down where there'll be the gates,
Down where death's door awaits.

I wish I could be taken,
My precious heart is achin,
If only I could be,
To think and hear and see.

Shameful for what I've done,
I feel like I'm the son,
Of absolutely none,
Of all or anyone.



I hope you like it. happy.gif
Lucy_Hitsugaya
QUOTE(gokenshadow @ Apr 4 2007, 09:40 PM) [snapback]418809[/snapback]
I just jumped of a cliff,
And no, it's not a myth,
My conscience went bye bye,
I now begin to fly,
Straight down from a blue sky.

I'm having second thoughts,
About my stupid plots,
I'm now afraid of dying,
I can't be saved from flying,
Down where there'll be the gates,
Down where death's door awaits.

I wish I could be taken,
My precious heart is achin,
If only I could be,
To think and hear and see.

Shameful for what I've done,
I feel like I'm the son,
Of absolutely none,
Of all or anyone.
I hope you like it. happy.gif

WOW!
i love it!!
^.^
Alejandroskies
same its sooooo good
Paradox886
Interesting...very interesting...It was good, in a way...not too much depth but unique.
Hotagi101
hmmm i like your poems well 80% of them because you do come with unique poems and i enjoy reading them happy.gif 8/10 good job
gokenshadow
Thanks for your comments everyone. happy.gif
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