I'm going to post some of my poems on here. tell me what ypou think of them.

Heartless

Having life is such a gift
Each day is a beatuy
Another time people are cruel
Reaching for the gun
Trying to end their own or
Loesing someone elses life
Each time the trigger is pulled
Suicide or Homicide
Someone either their own or someone elses life.

its good,m but to me, it lacks real emotion behind it.

Yeah I agree with you Kasumi!!But it's still good!!!Nice work!!^-^

Here's another one:
A journey to death

No one can hear my screams
The blood crawls
Somebody please save me
Pain that aches in my heart
Leaves as the knife runs across my skin
I’m tried of people trying to look like Brittany Spears
I stay in the woods
While the rain falls
In the middle of August
Everything becomes messy in my eyes
While the bloody rose falls
Into my cold dead hands
That belongs to the Grim Reaper
From now on.