It's over for you
It's over for me
You were my darling so tender and sweet
But why did you go
When I love you so
I cried all night wondering why
You left
It was just meant to be i guess
But it kills me inside
I don't want to cry
But it's over

cool!!! i like it

nice..i like the last part....
very nice...

wow that's cool
wish I could write poems...
I suck at them
all I can write is........

.................. *thinks* hmm... what can I write? *sigh* I'm hopeless

it's pretty easy actually. to write poems.
it doesn't always have to rhyme.
just write your feelings out. ^^

Not bad. I really liked it. Showed a lot of emotion and it's something that most people can relate to.

Thanks a lot for your comments,I would write more soon.

I like it

Not bad, I like the style, nice job.

i love it an as a fellow poem writer i congradulate u on ur artistic talent

great poem, sounds like a song i know thought XD but great poem!