OK here it is like a cafe' so yeah chill out hang out and pwease somment on my poems

Untouchable
I thought I was untouchable or I hoped I so hoped
I said I wasn't gonna let you hurt me again I was so wrong
You got so close only to tear me down
Look at me now the girl so cold and blocking everyone out
Never showing a fear or a tear now sitting letting tears stream down
Her face scared why did I let you move so close
Going back to her old ways she walks alone and cold not letting anyone get near her
Writing poems songs drawing anything to get you out
She walks alone and scared you hurt her so
You killed the tender, sweet, loving girl inside you killed her
She walks thinking of everything you did you hurt her so
Scared to say a word she bites her tongue feeling the blood fill her mouth

I have to
As these tears flow
I can see only the knife and the window
It hurts me and I can't stand it anymore I just wanna end it
All I wanna do is die
I never did anything to deserve this but here it is
I have to try to stay alive but I can't I need to die that is what my heart says
I have to live but I can't mess up anyone elses life I have to die I have to end it
I have to die
I have to end it all


So deep
Crimson tears wound so deep
Her eyes so red the pain surely shows
Her fear is there and her life is lost
Her memory is unkown
know no one remembers her
Or her death
A lost love it hurt her so
He broke her heart
So she killed herself
A simple cut turned into a hobby
A simple break up turned into a murder

lol they rock ^.^

cafe huh? COFFEE PLEASE!

aweome poems ^.^

lolzhere Kasu *hands Coffee* and cool thankz

HEYYY WAT ABOUT ME! *gets coffee* geez the service is bad here XD *starts reading a book, and giggling with kasu talkin about BOYS!!!!! XD lol*

HEYYY WAT ABOUT ME! *gets coffee* geez the service is bad here XD *starts reading a book, and giggling with kasu talkin about BOYS!!!!! XD lol*

LOL XD I don't know what your taling about, but I'm talking about....uhh....new JC Penny sales, yeah XD lol

oooo playing innocent are we

No...that's seriously what I'm talkin g about *thinks* he's on to me

lolz ummmm here is a new poem and I know it is crap





A world with so much meaning not a tear or fear

since you came

A life of love a life of meaning

No more deep depression only smiles and laughs

No more tears of sadness only of happiness



please exucse its crappiness not used to writing happy

awww, so sweet

awww, so sweet

your poems rock
(i wish my poem were this cool )

lolz My poems suck dude and thankz Kasu

i luv ur newest poem ^_^

thankz

here is a new one



No one sees no one cares
they laugh and cheer
as she slips the rope around her neck
they scream in laughter they want to see this
they never remembered her name till that day
the room she choose the cafeteria of all places
as she walked off the table they screamed and laughed louder
no one cared no one remembered no one sees
they laughed and cheered laughing as blood hit few
louder as the girl fell unconscious and soon died
telling everyone they laughed and cheered the teachers to
when they took her down they just kicked her laughing harder realizing shes dead this was there bonus

......omg i totally felt this o.O i dont know why but it actually brought sadness,anger, and fear into me XD NICE POEM!!!!!!!

What an awesome poem.
I like this poem coz it make me sad for the girl.
NICE.

Would you like to make another poem?

Yeah I love making Poems

XD wow of all the weird questions i've heard that must be the weirdest lol NICE POEM!

i loved te no one it disturbs me how ppl can really b like that

well they are No One is is bc of my Elementry school

"No One" was an interesting poem. Basically just posting to say I read it, lol. It was a good poem though.

Thankz

and here are two new ones


Why is it I can't help lose my mind why I am I really really diffrent I guess I am just what everyone thinks I try to be what everyone wants I change but I can't resit it I am diffrent I am what everyone hates I can't live up to the standers as a singer writer Vet or whatever Bella I need you here because I am just a freak a Loser now alone no one really says anything to me anymore they just laugh and talk about me like the only thing I ever did was wear your collar to school Ale' is the only one who still talks to me the others just luahg and point I don't klnkow why I lost something so important to me that I can't even handle it anymore I miss you so much I wish you were still here and alive


As I fall I wait for some one to catch me
yet none do but all stop and stare in laughter at me as I plument from what was my heaven to my hell
As I fall I wonder why must this be my fate
a life of misery and pain
This was my heaven true the pain though to much to bare
a knife so close a cut each time
I was scared I was hurt
but now I fall from this building to my hell
I know I will end I have to fall
I have to end no one wants
No one cares I hate this all this world
and now I fall to the end

Hey um I gots some poems...can I post 'em here? o.O

not in Hina's poetry place, but if you make a new topic you can

O_o yeah sorry just make a Peotry place

Those last two you posted were good Hina

A child's feelings

And

End's thoughts

Emotional I must say

Ty Childs feelings is something I jotted down ina Notebook in the 4th grade

I just have some poems I wanna add

Holacaust
Her breath so slow
her eyes so cold
the star of david cold around her neck
questions unanswered left in her Dairy
how old was she now
how long had she been hidden in the attic of her dads business
what happened in bulsen-burge
what happened to her life
so many killed mercilessly
how knew what this man did
how many saw the despair
how many cared
how many stop it now
how many years can this go on
how many still follow in his shoes?

Secret
her heart slowly beating the razor falling from her hand
blood splaters the walls
her eyes close as she falls
his name she repeats a simple churos of a name
another girl walks in
she screams a quiet sound
she shakes her friend hugging her and crying
the other girl awakens and shakes
the go along pretneding
"nothing happened nothing at all" they say
sitting in the same spot each day
two can keep a secret if ones dead
this secret carried on till ones grave

him
He smiles at me and kisses me
His warmth melts my clld heart
I pull my self closer
Everything he is is worth my life and more
his smiles so true I love to see
he sgrins at me and I can't help but to smile back
I faint and he catchs me
((It sucks I know they all do though))
she & he
She followed him asking why
He walked away from her
She cried her death her tears tell why
She cheated
He was harmed
She slit her wrists in the pain
A simple heart break & she took her life
This womans fake u think
Her heart ice after he left
He forgave her not
He loved her so
He cried and didn't accepct her death
His life he took her life she stole
She took his heart
He took his life
Her life never mattered
His life was her
She will never be found
He is where she is
Etrenal bliss for both
No more ending fights

My herion
He is my love
He is my pain
He is my tears
He is my death
He is my herion
He is my life
I died for him
I would do it all again
My life is in his hands
to do what he wishes
Even if I have to die to bring him joy
He is the drug I am Addicated to
He is killing me and killing you

My favorite? Holocaust.

As always, full of beautiful emotion, and imagery. Nice. Haven't lost your style.

O.O
damn.....
i found my equal.....

thankz I won a Award for Holaucaust acctaully

T.T
do u think we might actually be related? O.o
XD

Lol, that would be weird...

an award? Awesome, it's deserving of one.

but wouldn't it be awesome if we were?
2 poets that are related.
maybe we can combine our work ^^

2 Kasu: No it really isn't my poems suck
2 Sarah: cool anytime I like messing around with poetry

Newish poems
Presence
Eyes closed nothing around
I can feel the warmth surround
Though I've been cold for so long never warm even summers rays chill me
I can feel ur arms though your not really there your lips on my neck
Your voice in my ear is all thats really it feels so long away now I can barely hear
I cry out I need you now
Your presence is her all to normal
For I've felt it for so long I don't think I've gone insane
I need you your presence just makes me cry
Your words so cruel now
So confusing all the time
You say you love me but you run back to her
So leave me now with your presence give it to her
((I woke up at 12 am trying to right that till 6 am))

High school
All the girls so beautiful even the ones who stay with me
So skinny they seem to me like barbies
I wonder what I can do to be like them
Flirting with everyguy they see
I wonder if I can get over him
My brothers worried I'm crying and skipping meals
He knows I'm cutting again
To get over the one boy and to be skinny like the rest
He watchs me scared as we enter into school
All the beautiful girls pass by me even Ale, Chloe and Heather
Forgotten left behind
I must catch up my only talent long forgotten
Carefull not to move to fast others are noticing me now
But I'm not over him not yet I can't find my knife I use anything
From Staples to pencils just to bleed to be one of the beautiful girls

xD Your poems don't suck.

1st one makes me sad, and second one makes me worried. O.o

XD don't be I'm nothing like those silly girls though I did use my 3 bffs names

Alright good. xD Then I'd have to hunt you down and knock some sense into you.

XD u wish no offense I'm just kinda scary to people who haven't really met me XD i scare Ale and them sometimes Oh Kasu btw I'm a middle schooler no well I'm doing high school work but XD XD

...so? O.o

I'm only a year older then you are. xD It's not like it's illegal for me to knock some sense into you or anything. xD And even if it was, I would still do it, because it would be for your own good.

See? I have nothing but your best interests at heart.

Also? Yeah,. People think I'm scary too. Even people who HAVE met me. Even people I know really well.

XD trust me i'm stronger than I look Chloe is scared of me which makes me laugh sinc e she cuts XD and she thinks I'm over the top emo

Hmm...if you were over the top emo, you'd sound more depressed. xD And wouldn't use "xD".

I'm stronger then I look too.
Most people don't believe me, sure...
But that's because they've never seen me flip guys over my shoulder like a wrestler. xP

XD U haven't met me unless im really close to u I speak in monotone and barely laugh even Nicole who I am really close says I always seem depressed adn XD she might call over the top because I told her if she wanted to end her life to us a razor more pain the others but hanging seems better XD XD

xD I would have laughed.

I don't speak in a monotone. I don't normally speak at all. xD I'm really quiet, plus the fact that I look like I'm dead, the combination tends to freak people out. I laugh at them. xD

You and I would be a very formidable pair. O.o