This is where I'll be putting all my newest poetry and stuff!!!!!

Only because I'm bored and have nothing better to do, and Matt requested it...

so...here...


Society

Hear stomach's growling
Hear screams and crying,
A little baby lays there,
Starving and Dyeing,

Hear the mother crying,
Sacrificing her rpide,
Just to pay the taxes,
Of poverty-stricken society,

Open your eyes,
This is the world,
In which we live in,
This is society,

Bush is in the office,
Running the country ragged,
War on Terrorism,
That was his folly,

How'd he get elected?
I'll tell you how,
Society was blind and
Now we're stuck for two years more,

Open your eyes,
this is the world,
In which we live in,
This is society,

Listen to the tears fall,
As a young girl is raped,
Tomorrow she'll tell the police,
If she still lives through it,

They'll ignore the problem,
They'll ignore the murder,
The worst the rapist will get is,
A slapping, 51 times over,

Open your eyes,
This is the world,
In which we live in,
This is society,

Wife-beaters, Drug-users,
Rapists and Murderers,
Lies and deception, this is,
What makes our society,

Open your eyes,
this is the world,
In whcih we live in,
This is society...

its ok

cool Kasu cool

thanks for commenting guys...

pretty good

Nice Kasu, it's good

its okay i guess, but i really dunno

you don't know? then I'll tell you..

it SUCKS. Absolutely no form, no rythum, NOTHING. it doesn't even rhyme...it sucks....

Sometimes form and rhythm don't matter. You've got a poem that shows what society is like, the words are hard hitting. That's what makes it good

thanks

awesome ^.^ and yeah it does SROCK!!!!!!!!!

its great buuuuuttttttt you got spelling mistakes woohooo hahah yea ... ok sorry im done, no its great but when you wrote rpide instead fo pride it took me a while to figure out what it meant

I never said my typing skills were DA BOMB or anything I am the typo queen here...

yay for doubleposting!!!!!

new poem guys. And I don't ant to here anything about inspiration or whatever. just rate, and tell me what I can do to improve my style or whatever.




Didn't think you could make my heart break,
More then it was before,
No rainbows permeate the darkened clouds,
No more glittering sandy shores,

No more gorgeous colorful sunsets,
No more bright lights and sweet sounds,
No more laughter, no more loveing,
Just watching as my heart drowns,

In tears of red, and tears of black,
Of broken sobs that never came,
Of little smiles and glittering eyes,
That will never be the same,

Dont' come back, there's nothing left,
You've drained me of all I had,
Now loneliness is all I feel,
And it's very very sad,

Its sad to think of times wasted,
It sad to hear you lied,
Its sad because I'm having trouble,
Just saying " Farewell, good-bye"

10/10 YOU GUYS ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nice poem

Only one title came to mind after writing this...your gonna DIEEEEE!!!

With a snap of my fingers,
Just like that, it's all over,
Flash of light, from the sky,
Dont stare, duck for cover,

This is my wrath, now beware,
You've pushed me over the side,
Now I can't take it anymore,
I tried to control it, I tried,

One push, and I'm over,
One look and I am gone,
One word and I've got the knife out,
Pointed at you, pointed at them,

You thought I was weakling,
You thought I couldn't take it,
Look down the barrel,
Say good-bye to life,

In my hands, where the gun lays,
Pull the trigger, end it all,
No more teasing, no more bleeding,
No more crying, no decieving,

Look at me, look at them,
The people that you've hanged,
You thought I was helpless,
You thought I'd share their fate,

Well you took one step to many,
And you've pushed my over the edge,
Now enough rambling about you,
Cause in a minute, you'll be dead.

............wow im scared XD well i like it, really nice raw emotion WOOT FOR Brit Brit!!!!

i loved it kasu

thanks yeah, i was pissed that daY XD

lol i dont even wanna kno y

no, you proabbaly dont XD

Those last two poems are awesome. You're getting really good at writing. I liked the second to the last the most.

absolutly right there bro ^^
i totaly agree there

yay thanks guys!!! its good to know I'm improving!!!!

~Leave me to die~

End it all,
Leave me dyeing on the floor,
Pull the trigger,
Shoot me until i am no more,

Leave me bleeding,
Let the bullet run trhough,
Let it puncture my heart,
Cause its time, that lesson's due,

Slit my throat, leave me dyeing,
Stab me three times in the heart,
Burn me alive, drown me, slice me,
Rip me, tear me apart,

Cause this life isn't worth it,
If your not by my side,
Let it go, kill me now,
Ad leave me to die,
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don't ask, just rate and comment please. Thanks.

that was really sad kasu!!! cheer up stop being so sad!!!

kasu dats gud but sooooo depressing:(

thanks everyone

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Looking in the mirror,
There lives a girl,
Who once had it all,
And let it all go,

Here lies a girl,
Heartbroken and lost,
She once had found love,
And threw it away,

She once had a man
Right by her side,
She once had a boy,
To laugh with, to love,

She cast it aside,
As if it was nothing,
She ruined it all
And all for nothing,

She's lost in her tears,
never to be found,
She wants it all back,
But no one can save ner now,

She once had the love,
The love of her life,
And she let him go,
And now she wants him back,

She won't get him back,
She won't even try,
Because who'd want her back,
After what she had done.

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its so sad.....

pretty sad story.....afterall its the girls fault....

hey kasu, or should i say MOM, how did you make this poems?? are these your experiences before???or what???

Well, in a sense, Every poem i write usually has something to do with what I'm feeling at the moment. And I draw inspiration from that, and turn it into a poem. Does this answer your question, SON? ^^

and yes, its very sad, because it IS the girl's fault....

yeah thanks mom....i dont wanna think that those things really happened to you...it would be very painful for you...

Those last two poems were good. I can defiantly relate to them. If you don't remember it, you can try to go back and find my poem "Obsession" They remind me a bit of that.