Hey everyone i have been attempting to write a naruto based story(The original characters aren't the main characters but they will appear in it from time to time.)
These will be the main characters of my story
Characters
Doragon(Hay)(Comes from a rare Clan called Doragon which is where he get's his name)(Ninjutsu Specialist, Uses sword after three year break)
Genkaku(Louden)(Comes from a rare Clan called Genkakau which is where he get's his name)(Genjutsu User)
Garo(Boob)(Isn't from a specific clan)(uses Oil based jutsu)
Tori
Diagro(Dougie)(Is part of a clan which is Unknown even to him, Has a unique bloodline called Precog)
Yori
Mick(Doragon's Cousin from his adopted family)(Support jutsu User)
Also before i start the story i will be writing a brief history of the Genkaku and Doragon clan's, it won't be in full detail as the full history will be told in my story.
Story Chapter
The Chunnin Exam
An Unexpected Mission
Akatsuki Retreat
Angels Of Death
Wings Of Destiny
1 year passes
The New Hidden Village
Straniza's Test
Straniza's Grand Opening
The History Of Straniza
one month passes
Doragon's Childhood
The History of The Doragon Clan
The Spark Of The Great War
Genkaku Clan Vs Doragon Clan
Devastation Of The Konoha And Straniza
The United Force
The Two Prospects
three year's pass
Junnin Exam
Doragon Vs Genkaku (Eternal Rivals Battle)
The Final Round
Enemy Invasion
The Battle Continues
The Hokage Step's In
Desperate Measures
They Come To There Sences
i will do a second post with a preview of the chunnin exam chapter.
Here is the preview each chapter will be in five parts. I hope you like it and will read my story as the new parts come out. i will try get the first part up tomorrow or on monday at the latest.
Final Rounds Of The Chunnin Exam
Match: Doragon Vs Diagro
Examiner: Begin.
Doragon: So how do you feel?
Diagro: What kind of question is that?
Doragon: Well i just thought since you're fighting me you must be nervous.
Diagro: I'm not the same you know, i'm alot diffrent than one year ago.
Doragon: Is that so, So you won't mind if i come at you seriously?
Diagro: Well put it this way if you don't you'll die.
Doragon: (Looks at Diagro Angrily) Don't get cocky.
[ Doragon then runs at Diagro, Diagro suddenly pulls out a kunai and throws it at Doragon but Doragon just hit's it aside easily. He then punches Diagro knocking him back slightly He then does a spinning kick and hit's Diagro into the air]
Doragon: For someone who was so cocky you're fighting is as sloppy as usual.
Diagro: (Lands on his feet, and wipes blood off his lip) I just wanted to show you something.
Doragon: And what was that?
Diagro: the diffrence between me fighting you normally and then fighting you with my Precog.
Doragon: Precog?
Diagro: That's right i'll explain it simply for you. Precog is a Doujutsu that is a bit similar to the Hyuuga's Byakugen, It let's me see my opponent's chakra but here's the great part. It let's me see what movement's you're doing for example if you were going to punch me with you're left hand i would know before you swung you're arm at me.
Doragon: What? Like Sharingan?
Diagro: No it's not like Shairngan, Sharingan determines the opponents next movements, Precog is 100% accurate about the opponents next move. Precog show's me you're energy and chakra so for example if you were going to kick me i would be able to see you putting you're chakra and energy into you're left leg which would let me know you were going to kick me with that leg, By being able to do that i can nullify all you're taijutsu.
Doragon: (Smirks) It doesn't make a diffrence you still won't win.
Diagro: We'll see. Precog.
[Diagro then throws two kunai's at Doragon, As Doragon Goes to take out a Kunai Diagro aim's for his next spot. Diagro then takes out three shurikens, Doragon then starts to deflect the two Kunai's. As he is doing so Diagro throws the three shurikens, Doragon manages to deflect two of them but is hit with one in the ribs.]
Doragon: Argh.(Takes the shuriken out of his side) {Damn}
Diagro: You shouldn't takes you're eye's off you're opponent.
[Doragon then get's a shocked look on his face as he realises that Diagro had move behind him within a couple of seconds, Diagro then begins to unleash attacks on Doragon. Doragon unable to block a single one is then throwen across the ground in agony]
Diagro: This is the diffrence when i use Precog, You can't even lay a finger on me.
Doragon: (Struggling to get to his feet) {I can't believe the diffrence that thing makes} (Smirks) Just shut up and come at me.
Diagro: This time i'll end it.
[Diagro then runs at Doragon, Doragon then begins to do handseals but before he get's to finish Diagro grabs his hands and stops him]
Diagro: Now, Now, Now. Don't do hand seals.
Doragon: How did you.....Get ...here so fast?
Diagro: Well my speed is complimentrary to my team mates helping me with my training. You see the defeat i suffered at the hands of you last time ashamed me so much i have trained every day since that day for atleast 13 hours, Even when i have a mission i train before or afterwards.
Doragon: But......But.....B.
Diagro: Now isn't this a great turn around. The guy i couldn't even lay a finger on is now out of my league.
Doragon: This fight isn't over.
Diagro: Actually i'm getting bored so i'm just gonna finish here. I hope you don't mind.
Doragon: Well actually i do, Sharingan(Eye's go to stage 2 of sharingan)
Diagro: What the hell?
Doragon: You didn't know about this did you.
[Doragon then pulls his hands away and goes to punch Diagro with his right hand, As Diagro goes to dodge the punch and counter Doragon knees him in the stomach, Doragon then uppercuts him then does a roundhouse kick to him which throws him across the arena]
Diagro: (Get's to his feet) How...Could...You?
Doragon: I guess my sharingan is better than that Precog you've got.
Diagro: Sharingan shouldn't make a diffrence, i should still be able to counter all you're movements.
Doragon: Just by listening to you i can tell you don't understand that precog you've got completely yet, which give's you a big weakness and disadvantage. like you said before Sharingan show's me the movement's of my opponent and slows them down for me aswell, When you went to dodge my punch you were so focused on countering that all i had was knee you and i had the upper hand.
Diagro: you Bastard.
Doragon: Don't be like that just because i have gotten the better of you. If you spent more time trying to understand that precog you wouldn't have falling for such a simple tactic, Also you brought out you're trump card right at the begining of the fight. That also gave me the advantage all i had to do was go on for a little while and see if you had anything else that you could do, But you can't can you.
Diagro: Shut up.
Doragon: You see you should always reserve you're trump card until you have witnessed you're opponent fight and possibily use some of his techniques that way you know if you're trump card will become useful or not. You made me have to use Sharingan because of you're speed, i couldn't use any ninjutsu because i didn't have time to do hand seals so sharingan was my only option. Also when i went to punch you i noticed that you were completely focused on my hand which gave the oppertunity to knee you and take further action after that.
Diagro: i will defeat you.
Doragon: No you won't, for two reasons first you have to focus excatley on what you're doing when using precog and secondly i still have jutsu which i haven't used yet.
Diagro: I've heard enough. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
[Diagro then ran toward Doragon, Doragon then started to do hand seals. As Diagro went to grab his hands again Doragon spinned around behind Diagro]
Doragon: This is the end. Katon Dragon Flames no jutsu.
[Diagro is then hit with two dragon flames from point blank range which knocked him uncouncious and unable to continue the fight]
Examiner: The winner of this Match is Doragon.
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not bad 
there will be ALOT of my own created jutsu in this so i will try explaining them as much as i can or i will just write out a jutsu list explaining about them all.The main characters are Doragon and Genkaku
keep up the good work
Here is Part 1 of The Chunnin exam chapter
The Begining(The Chunnin Exam)
Forest Of Death
Time Remaining - 10 hours
Garo: We should be okay here for a while.
Nemi: I don't get why we have to wait here, We do have both scrolls.
Doragon: She's right you guys go on ahead once i have recovered a bit i'll catch up.
Nemi: No Way.
Doragon: Though you would have said that.
[Doragon then falls into a deep sleep, Garo keep's watch as Nemi washes her self in a river next to them]
Garo: {Oh man she's right behind me, Maybe i should look and see what happens.}
Nemi: Don't you dare turn around Garo or i'll kill you.
Garo: Obviously i wouldn't turn around what do you take me for.
[At that moment Doragon opens his left eye slightly, Just enough to see Nemi Nude]
Doragon: Damn what a sight to wake up to.
Garo: (Turns around slowly) YOU WERE NEVER ASLEEP.
Nemi: (Gets a demon lok on her face) Doragon, I'll get you for this.
[One of Garo's traps are then set off]
Garo: Well we have no time for revenge just now.
Doragon: (Struggle to get up) So we have visiters.
Nemi:(Put's clothes back on) Doragon how do you expect to fight like that?
Doragon: eh....well...eh...I'll...Manage.
Garo: There here get down and hide.
Doragon: No ******* way, Thats the guy that stabbed me.
nemi: Don't go out there Doragon.
Doragon: I have to Nemi, My pride and Honour are riding on me defeating this guy.
[Nemi then hit's Doragon on the head which knocks him out.]
Garo: We're leaving this place, i'll drag his body.
nemi: Good, let's go.
[Just as they were leaving they got spotted, The other contestant then started to run towards them. Garo was then prepared to protect himself and nemi, But suddenly he collapsed as he was running. Garo then walked over to check him]
Garo: Put's his hand on the contestant's neck) He's dead.
Nemi: Come on we gotta get away from here.
Garo: (Runs over and picks up Doragon) Let's go.
Person: Not so fast.
[Garo and Nemi stop Immediately]
Person: I ain't letting you escape before i have some fun.
Nemi: We don't intend to fight you.
Person: And why is that?
Nemi: Our friend is injuried and he needs medical help.
Person: Is he the strongest of you three?
Garo: Well (Put's his head down with shame) yes.
Person: Fine then, He will fight me to save you're lifes.
Nemi: What!
[The person then appeared infront of garo and healed Doragon completely, Doragon then jumped off of Garo's shoulder and done some stretches.]
Doragon: Oh man that feels much better, Alright let's do this.
person: You were listening?
Doragon: Of course i was, I was waiting for the right time to attack you.
Person: Well let's begin.
Doragon: Fine.
[Doragon then charged towards the person, But the person then suddenly disappeared and doragon was then stabbed through the throat with a katana. Suddenly Doragon was brought out of a Genjutsu and he collapsed]
Genkaku: He wasn't much fun.
Garo: You bastard.
Genkaku: Ok you can all go in, I wanna fight him in the finals.
Nemi: You're an a******.
Genkaku: What ever.
40 minutes later
Hokage: Well we only have 3 teams that got through this year, so in one months time the final round will begin.
Mick: I'm so gonna kick a**.
Hokage: Why did you interupt me there? Tell you what for interupting me you will be washing the Hokage faces all by you're selfs today.
mick: Damn it.
Hokage: Now train hard and get ready for what could be you're most difficult fight's to date.
Final Rounds Of The Chunnin Exam
Match: Doragon Vs Diagro
Examiner: Begin.
Doragon: So how do you feel?
Diagro: What kind of question is that?
Doragon: Well i just thought since you're fighting me you must be nervous.
Diagro: I'm not the same you know, i'm alot diffrent than one year ago.
Doragon: Is that so, So you won't mind if i come at you seriously?
Diagro: Well put it this way if you don't you'll die.
Doragon: (Looks at Diagro Angrily) Don't get cocky.
[ Doragon then runs at Diagro, Diagro suddenly pulls out a kunai and throws it at Doragon but Doragon just hit's it aside easily. He then punches Diagro knocking him back slightly He then does a spinning kick and hit's Diagro into the air]
Doragon: For someone who was so cocky you're fighting is as sloppy as usual.
Diagro: (Lands on his feet, and wipes blood off his lip) I just wanted to show you something.
Doragon: And what was that?
Diagro: the diffrence between me fighting you normally and then fighting you with my Precog.
Doragon: Precog?
Diagro: That's right i'll explain it simply for you. Precog is a Doujutsu that is a bit similar to the Hyuuga's Byakugen, It let's me see my opponent's chakra but here's the great part. It let's me see what movement's you're doing for example if you were going to punch me with you're left hand i would know before you swung you're arm at me.
Doragon: What? Like Sharingan?
Diagro: No it's not like Shairngan, Sharingan determines the opponents next movements, Precog is 100% accurate about the opponents next move. Precog show's me you're energy and chakra so for example if you were going to kick me i would be able to see you putting you're chakra and energy into you're left leg which would let me know you were going to kick me with that leg, By being able to do that i can nullify all you're taijutsu.
Doragon: (Smirks) It doesn't make a diffrence you still won't win.
Diagro: We'll see. Precog.
[Diagro then throws two kunai's at Doragon, As Doragon Goes to take out a Kunai Diagro aim's for his next spot. Diagro then takes out three shurikens, Doragon then starts to deflect the two Kunai's. As he is doing so Diagro throws the three shurikens, Doragon manages to deflect two of them but is hit with one in the ribs.]
Doragon: Argh.(Takes the shuriken out of his side) {Damn}
Diagro: You shouldn't takes you're eye's off you're opponent.
[Doragon then get's a shocked look on his face as he realises that Diagro had move behind him within a couple of seconds, Diagro then begins to unleash attacks on Doragon. Doragon unable to block a single one is then throwen across the ground in agony]
Diagro: This is the diffrence when i use Precog, You can't even lay a finger on me.
Doragon: (Struggling to get to his feet) {I can't believe the diffrence that thing makes} (Smirks) Just shut up and come at me.
Diagro: This time i'll end it.
[Diagro then runs at Doragon, Doragon then begins to do handseals but before he get's to finish Diagro grabs his hands and stops him]
Diagro: Now, Now, Now. Don't do hand seals.
Doragon: How did you.....Get ...here so fast?
Diagro: Well my speed is complimentrary to my team mates helping me with my training. You see the defeat i suffered at the hands of you last time ashamed me so much i have trained every day since that day for atleast 13 hours, Even when i have a mission i train before or afterwards.
Doragon: But......But.....B.
Diagro: Now isn't this a great turn around. The guy i couldn't even lay a finger on is now out of my league.
Doragon: This fight isn't over.
Diagro: Actually i'm getting bored so i'm just gonna finish here. I hope you don't mind.
Doragon: Well actually i do, Sharingan(Eye's go to stage 2 of sharingan)
Diagro: What the hell?
Doragon: You didn't know about this did you.
[Doragon then pulls his hands away and goes to punch Diagro with his right hand, As Diagro goes to dodge the punch and counter Doragon knees him in the stomach, Doragon then uppercuts him then does a roundhouse kick to him which throws him across the arena]
Diagro: (Get's to his feet) How...Could...You?
Doragon: I guess my sharingan is better than that Precog you've got.
Diagro: Sharingan shouldn't make a diffrence, i should still be able to counter all you're movements.
Doragon: Just by listening to you i can tell you don't understand that precog you've got completely yet, which give's you a big weakness and disadvantage. like you said before Sharingan show's me the movement's of my opponent and slows them down for me aswell, When you went to dodge my punch you were so focused on countering that all i had was knee you and i had the upper hand.
Diagro: you Bastard.
Doragon: Don't be like that just because i have gotten the better of you. If you spent more time trying to understand that precog you wouldn't have falling for such a simple tactic, Also you brought out you're trump card right at the begining of the fight. That also gave me the advantage all i had to do was go on for a little while and see if you had anything else that you could do, But you can't can you.
Diagro: Shut up.
Doragon: You see you should always reserve you're trump card until you have witnessed you're opponent fight and possibily use some of his techniques that way you know if you're trump card will become useful or not. You made me have to use Sharingan because of you're speed, i couldn't use any ninjutsu because i didn't have time to do hand seals so sharingan was my only option. Also when i went to punch you i noticed that you were completely focused on my hand which gave the oppertunity to knee you and take further action after that.
Diagro: i will defeat you.
Doragon: No you won't, for two reasons first you have to focus excatley on what you're doing when using precog and secondly i still have jutsu which i haven't used yet.
Diagro: I've heard enough. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
[Diagro then ran toward Doragon, Doragon then started to do hand seals. As Diagro went to grab his hands again Doragon spinned around behind Diagro]
Doragon: This is the end. Katon Dragon Flames no jutsu.
[Diagro is then hit with two dragon flames from point blank range which knocked him uncouncious and unable to continue the fight]
Examiner: The winner of this Match is Doragon.
really hope you enjoy it, But the start of my story isn't as good as the rest.
The Begining(The Chunnin Exam)
Forest Of Death
Time Remaining - 10 hours
Garo: We should be okay here for a while.
Nemi: I don't get why we have to wait here, We do have both scrolls.
Doragon: She's right you guys go on ahead once i have recovered a bit i'll catch up.
Nemi: No Way.
Doragon: Though you would have said that.
[Doragon then falls into a deep sleep, Garo keep's watch as Nemi washes her self in a river next to them]
Garo: {Oh man she's right behind me, Maybe i should look and see what happens.}
Nemi: Don't you dare turn around Garo or i'll kill you.
Garo: Obviously i wouldn't turn around what do you take me for.
[At that moment Doragon opens his left eye slightly, Just enough to see Nemi Nude]
Doragon: Damn what a sight to wake up to.
Garo: (Turns around slowly) YOU WERE NEVER ASLEEP.
Nemi: (Gets a demon lok on her face) Doragon, I'll get you for this.
[One of Garo's traps are then set off]
Garo: Well we have no time for revenge just now.
Doragon: (Struggle to get up) So we have visiters.
Nemi:(Put's clothes back on) Doragon how do you expect to fight like that?
Doragon: eh....well...eh...I'll...Manage.
Garo: There here get down and hide.
Doragon: No ******* way, Thats the guy that stabbed me.
nemi: Don't go out there Doragon.
Doragon: I have to Nemi, My pride and Honour are riding on me defeating this guy.
[Nemi then hit's Doragon on the head which knocks him out.]
Garo: We're leaving this place, i'll drag his body.
nemi: Good, let's go.
[Just as they were leaving they got spotted, The other contestant then started to run towards them. Garo was then prepared to protect himself and nemi, But suddenly he collapsed as he was running. Garo then walked over to check him]
Garo: Put's his hand on the contestant's neck) He's dead.
Nemi: Come on we gotta get away from here.
Garo: (Runs over and picks up Doragon) Let's go.
Person: Not so fast.
[Garo and Nemi stop Immediately]
Person: I ain't letting you escape before i have some fun.
Nemi: We don't intend to fight you.
Person: And why is that?
Nemi: Our friend is injuried and he needs medical help.
Person: Is he the strongest of you three?
Garo: Well (Put's his head down with shame) yes.
Person: Fine then, He will fight me to save you're lifes.
Nemi: What!
[The person then appeared infront of garo and healed Doragon completely, Doragon then jumped off of Garo's shoulder and done some stretches.]
Doragon: Oh man that feels much better, Alright let's do this.
person: You were listening?
Doragon: Of course i was, I was waiting for the right time to attack you.
Person: Well let's begin.
Doragon: Fine.
[Doragon then charged towards the person, But the person then suddenly disappeared and doragon was then stabbed through the throat with a katana. Suddenly Doragon was brought out of a Genjutsu and he collapsed]
Genkaku: He wasn't much fun.
Garo: You bastard.
Genkaku: Ok you can all go in, I wanna fight him in the finals.
Nemi: You're an a******.
Genkaku: What ever.
40 minutes later
Hokage: Well we only have 3 teams that got through this year, so in one months time the final round will begin.
Mick: I'm so gonna kick a**.
Hokage: Why did you interupt me there? Tell you what for interupting me you will be washing the Hokage faces all by you're selfs today.
mick: Damn it.
Hokage: Now train hard and get ready for what could be you're most difficult fight's to date.
Final Rounds Of The Chunnin Exam
Match: Doragon Vs Diagro
Examiner: Begin.
Doragon: So how do you feel?
Diagro: What kind of question is that?
Doragon: Well i just thought since you're fighting me you must be nervous.
Diagro: I'm not the same you know, i'm alot diffrent than one year ago.
Doragon: Is that so, So you won't mind if i come at you seriously?
Diagro: Well put it this way if you don't you'll die.
Doragon: (Looks at Diagro Angrily) Don't get cocky.
[ Doragon then runs at Diagro, Diagro suddenly pulls out a kunai and throws it at Doragon but Doragon just hit's it aside easily. He then punches Diagro knocking him back slightly He then does a spinning kick and hit's Diagro into the air]
Doragon: For someone who was so cocky you're fighting is as sloppy as usual.
Diagro: (Lands on his feet, and wipes blood off his lip) I just wanted to show you something.
Doragon: And what was that?
Diagro: the diffrence between me fighting you normally and then fighting you with my Precog.
Doragon: Precog?
Diagro: That's right i'll explain it simply for you. Precog is a Doujutsu that is a bit similar to the Hyuuga's Byakugen, It let's me see my opponent's chakra but here's the great part. It let's me see what movement's you're doing for example if you were going to punch me with you're left hand i would know before you swung you're arm at me.
Doragon: What? Like Sharingan?
Diagro: No it's not like Shairngan, Sharingan determines the opponents next movements, Precog is 100% accurate about the opponents next move. Precog show's me you're energy and chakra so for example if you were going to kick me i would be able to see you putting you're chakra and energy into you're left leg which would let me know you were going to kick me with that leg, By being able to do that i can nullify all you're taijutsu.
Doragon: (Smirks) It doesn't make a diffrence you still won't win.
Diagro: We'll see. Precog.
[Diagro then throws two kunai's at Doragon, As Doragon Goes to take out a Kunai Diagro aim's for his next spot. Diagro then takes out three shurikens, Doragon then starts to deflect the two Kunai's. As he is doing so Diagro throws the three shurikens, Doragon manages to deflect two of them but is hit with one in the ribs.]
Doragon: Argh.(Takes the shuriken out of his side) {Damn}
Diagro: You shouldn't takes you're eye's off you're opponent.
[Doragon then get's a shocked look on his face as he realises that Diagro had move behind him within a couple of seconds, Diagro then begins to unleash attacks on Doragon. Doragon unable to block a single one is then throwen across the ground in agony]
Diagro: This is the diffrence when i use Precog, You can't even lay a finger on me.
Doragon: (Struggling to get to his feet) {I can't believe the diffrence that thing makes} (Smirks) Just shut up and come at me.
Diagro: This time i'll end it.
[Diagro then runs at Doragon, Doragon then begins to do handseals but before he get's to finish Diagro grabs his hands and stops him]
Diagro: Now, Now, Now. Don't do hand seals.
Doragon: How did you.....Get ...here so fast?
Diagro: Well my speed is complimentrary to my team mates helping me with my training. You see the defeat i suffered at the hands of you last time ashamed me so much i have trained every day since that day for atleast 13 hours, Even when i have a mission i train before or afterwards.
Doragon: But......But.....B.
Diagro: Now isn't this a great turn around. The guy i couldn't even lay a finger on is now out of my league.
Doragon: This fight isn't over.
Diagro: Actually i'm getting bored so i'm just gonna finish here. I hope you don't mind.
Doragon: Well actually i do, Sharingan(Eye's go to stage 2 of sharingan)
Diagro: What the hell?
Doragon: You didn't know about this did you.
[Doragon then pulls his hands away and goes to punch Diagro with his right hand, As Diagro goes to dodge the punch and counter Doragon knees him in the stomach, Doragon then uppercuts him then does a roundhouse kick to him which throws him across the arena]
Diagro: (Get's to his feet) How...Could...You?
Doragon: I guess my sharingan is better than that Precog you've got.
Diagro: Sharingan shouldn't make a diffrence, i should still be able to counter all you're movements.
Doragon: Just by listening to you i can tell you don't understand that precog you've got completely yet, which give's you a big weakness and disadvantage. like you said before Sharingan show's me the movement's of my opponent and slows them down for me aswell, When you went to dodge my punch you were so focused on countering that all i had was knee you and i had the upper hand.
Diagro: you Bastard.
Doragon: Don't be like that just because i have gotten the better of you. If you spent more time trying to understand that precog you wouldn't have falling for such a simple tactic, Also you brought out you're trump card right at the begining of the fight. That also gave me the advantage all i had to do was go on for a little while and see if you had anything else that you could do, But you can't can you.
Diagro: Shut up.
Doragon: You see you should always reserve you're trump card until you have witnessed you're opponent fight and possibily use some of his techniques that way you know if you're trump card will become useful or not. You made me have to use Sharingan because of you're speed, i couldn't use any ninjutsu because i didn't have time to do hand seals so sharingan was my only option. Also when i went to punch you i noticed that you were completely focused on my hand which gave the oppertunity to knee you and take further action after that.
Diagro: i will defeat you.
Doragon: No you won't, for two reasons first you have to focus excatley on what you're doing when using precog and secondly i still have jutsu which i haven't used yet.
Diagro: I've heard enough. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
[Diagro then ran toward Doragon, Doragon then started to do hand seals. As Diagro went to grab his hands again Doragon spinned around behind Diagro]
Doragon: This is the end. Katon Dragon Flames no jutsu.
[Diagro is then hit with two dragon flames from point blank range which knocked him uncouncious and unable to continue the fight]
Examiner: The winner of this Match is Doragon.
really hope you enjoy it, But the start of my story isn't as good as the rest.
i'm just putting the whole chunin exam part in now
Examiner: Next Fight will be against Mick and Goro.
Mick: You look tough.
Goro: Thanks(Smiles)
Examiner: Begin
Mick: I'm Sorry but i can't hold back.
Goro: Neeither can i.(Does Handseals)
Mick:(Does Handseals) Konoha Style Body Binding 1.
[As Vines come out of the ground Goro jumps to avoid them but the vines follow him up into the air]
Goro: Katon Raising Blaze No Jutsu.
[ Suddenly the Ground shakes as a giant burst of fire came from within the ground and out into the arena, As the fire came out the ground it passed through the vines burning them. Goro then landed on the ground and started doing more hand seals]
Goro: Nice technique, you almost had me.
Mick:Same goes to you i never expected anthing like that.
Goro: Well we can't talk all day so let's meet up after the exam.
Mick: Sure(Does Handseals) Vine Blizzard no Jutsu.
[Suddenly thousands of vines came out the ground and started to gather up as if a blizzard had come into the arena, the Vines then started to move towards Goro at an incredible speed. Goro started to run backwards]
Goro: {What a technique} Tidal Blaze No Jutsu.
[A Tidal wave made of nothing but flames crached into all the vines and incinerated them all the tidal wave then went away, Goro then looked at Mick's feet and noticed vines rapped around his left leg]
Goro: A vine around you're leg?(A vine then comes out the ground and wraps itself around Goro's Body)
Mick: That's right, This vines wraps around my leg and i convert my chakra into it, By doing so i make the vine harder and tougher that's why this vine was protected by you're fire attack. All i had to do was hide it and wait for an opening.
Goro: That's a sneaky trick.
Mick: But it work's, I ahve to finish this now. (Does Handseals) Vine Chakra consumtion.
[The vine wrapped around Goro then consume's and eat's all of Goro's chakra. Goro then collapses]
Examiner: Winner of the Match Mick. The next match will be between Genkaku and Yori.
Examiner: Are you ok?
Yori: (Sweating) I'm fine.
Genkaku: Let's have a good fight.
Yori: We maybe from the same team but i can't hold back.
Genkaku: Neither can i.
Examiner: We'll get started then.
Genkaku: You can fight this first. Genkaku Shadow Copy.
[Genkaku then makes a shadow clone of Yori]
Yori: You want me to fight against myself?
genkaku: Well i ain't really aiming for that, you of all people should know just how back i am at Taijutsu but this clone i just created is just like you, So this is my way of Taijutsu. Have fun.
Yori: You, Little Bastard. Fien i'll play you're game.
[The clone then runs at Yori as it get's near her it suddenly disappears, Yori is then kicked in the back. The clone then grabs Yori and turns her upside down, The clone then jumps up into the air.]
Yori: {What the hell this is my Viper Slam technique} (Looks confused)
Genkaku: Oh sorry i forgot to say that clone can use the technique i have seen you use, that should sort out the confused look you have.
Yori: {Well if it's my move i can counter it, I just have to think............}
[The clone then got into position for the crash that was about to happen]
Yori: {Got it}
[As they headed towards the ground Yori began to move from side to side, when suddenly they hit the ground. Dust then clouded the stadium as the dust settled Yori was standing and the clone had died]
Genkaku: Excellent, well done Yori.
Yori: (Breathing heavy) What did you expect?
Genkaku: Don't get me wrong i knew you would win i ain't dumb, That little test tho has just gave me the upper hand for this next technique.
Yori: What?
Genkaku: (Smirks) Demonic seal(Genkaku's Eye's then turn pitch black and a dark cloud surrounds his body)
Yori: ****.
Genkaku: It's time to end this. (Aim's his arms at Yori) Demonic Demise
[The cloud surrounding Genkaku's body then heads for Yori at an amazing speed, As she dodges it and runs for Genkaku she notices the cloud begining to return to him. She then increases her speed with the cloud behind her as she get's to Genkaku she goes to punch him]
Genkaku: (Looks at Yori) Gotcha.
[More of the dark cloud then burst from Genkaku's body and surrounds Yori stopping her movement completely, Seconds later she collapses uncouncious]
Examiner: Winner Genkaku. Next fight will be between Garo Vs Tori
Garo: I'm gonna enjoy this.
Tori: Keep talking.
Examiner: Begin.
Garo: Don't underestimate me.
Tori: What ever.
Garo: (Get's Angry) I SAID DON'T UNDERESTIMATE ME.
Stands
Mick: Now she's done it.
Genkaku: DOne what exactly?
Mick: Got him mad, She'll lose now.
Doragon: You really are an idiot. I can't believe you're on the same team as me and him, He get's worse when he's angry you idiot.
Mick: Oh it's you that get's better.
Doragon: I never lose my temper in a fight, It's Yori that improves.
Arena
Garo: Oil Slide.
[Garo then spits out oil, Tori trys to dodge it bu fails and slips on it. As she trys to get up she notices oil as actually grabbed her feet]
Tori: What the hell is this?
Garo: My oil, what you didn't think it was normal. My oil is a bit like Gaara's sand in the way that i can control it completely , Which explains why it has grabbed you.
Tori: Well i guess it's the counter attack then. (Does handseals)
Garo: Idon't think so. ignite.
[Suddenly the oil catches fire the fire then spreads down towards Tori]
Tori: Suiton Great Water Blast No Jutsu.
[Tori then fires a large water ball from her hands, As it touches the flames it puts them out straight away the water ball then hit's Garo and explodes. The blast from the explosion send Garo crashing into the arena wall, He then falls to the ground unable to move.]
Examiner: Winner Tori. I will now announce the semi final matches.
Garo: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. MY SPINE.
[Medical staff then come and take Garo away on a stretcher.]
Examiner: The first semi final match will be against Doragon and Genkaku, Which means the second match will be against Mick and Tori.
stands
Doragon: (Shocked expression on his face) I got him................Anyone but him.
Mick: You're worried, About fighting him?
Doragon: I......I....Just...Can't beat him.
Mick: You'll win this time, don't worry.(Smiles)
Doragon: Shut the hell up. I'll be lucky if i even hit him.
Arena
Examiner: Hurry up and come down here.
Genkaku: Taking his time.
Examiner: Now we can begin.
Genkaku: You took you're time, Doragon.
Doragon: Just coming up with a plan that's all.
Genkaku: Won't matter cos i ain't holding back.
Doragon: That's alright, Even if you defeat me aslong as i weaking you enough.
Genkaku: What do you mean by that?
Doragon: That means even if you defeat me i'm making sure you don't win this tournament.
Genkaku: Now you just pissed me off.
Doragon: Have i! Oh well i'm dreadfully sorry.
Genkaku: You smart mouthed bastard, DEMONICAL SEAL.
Doragon: Using that already,(Smirks) You really should learn to take you're time.( Drops a smoke bomb at his feet)
Genkaku: You think smoke will help you.
[The smoke then covers Doragon, genkaku then get's the black clius the surround the smoke]
Genkaku: You have no way out now.
Doragon: {Alright the smoke was the first out of the five parts, Next the Jutsu Seal} (Does handseals) Dragon Cage No jutsu.
Genkaku: Now what you gonna do, I have you trapped and the smoke is settling.
[Suddenly Doragon runs out of the smoke and heads for Genkaku, Genkaku quickly gets the cloud around the smoke to chase after Doragon. As the cloud grabs Doragon Genkaku get's it to rip him in two, Suddenly Doragon turns into a puff of smoke]
Doragon: Third part of my plan is a success.
Genkaku: Third part?
Doragon: Firstly i got you angry which made you wanna finish me off quickly, i used the smoke so you couldn't see me. Then i used a single shadow clone to attack you so the clud you control would go after him, And now it's the fourth part.
Genkaku: Forth part?
Doragon: That's right, Katon Dragon Flames No Jutsu.
Genkaku: ****.
[Genkaku then looks confused as he fails to notice any dragon flames, He turns around and see's them unable to dodge them he get's his black cloud to guard him. But the sheer power of the flames push him back until he stops on a seal which has been placed on the ground]
Doragon: (Smirks) Kai.
[The seal then breaks and Genkaku is put in a cage made of fire, Genkaku then starts to get his chakra drained out of him]
Genkaku: What the hell is this?
Doragon: This is my new technique, i created it for capturing the enemy. It drains you're Chakra which means you could break out even if you had the power too.
Genkaku: You tricked me when telling me you're first three parts of you're plan.
Doragon: Obviously i did, the first part was the smoke, the second was the seal, the third was the clone, The fourth was the attack and the last was capturing you in that cage. If i don't say so myself it was a really good plan.
Genkaku: I have to admit it is a good plan, but this cage won't be able to withstand my Dark Spiral technique.
Doragon: I wouldn't use that it would be a waste of what ever chakra you have left, the cage would consume the chakra before you even finished getting the attack ready.
genkaku: Oh, So that's how this thing works, So all i need to do is find the weak point then.
Doragon: There is no weak point for you to find.
Genkaku: There is a weakness in all Jutsu, Even in Genjutsu there is a weakness. That you can't hide from.
Doragon: You're wasteing you're time. (A sharp pain hit's Doragons chest, He then put's his hand on it) Argh.
Genkaku: So it's started now.
Doragon: What's ...Started?
Genkaku: The posion has started to move through you're body, So tell me which do you think will win? My Poison or you're chakra consuming cage.
Doragon: When did you. AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH.(Falls to his knees)
Genkaku: I'll tell you but it will most likely be the last thing you hear. (Flash back to when Doragon used the smoke bomb and genkaku activated Demonic Seal) When i activated my demonic seal you where hiding in smoke from you're smoke bomb, I used a Bomb i created for this exam it's simply called a poison bomb. I got my Demon cloud to take the bomb and throw it into the smoke, The effects from the poison bomb have a five minute delay. That's why you haven't felt the effects til now, You have about ten minutes to get treatment or you'll die within an hour.
Doragon: You sneaky son of a *****.
Genkaku: So do you think you can win?
Doragon: Well All i have to do is finish you off within ten minutes and i'll be fine.
Genkaku: Actually it will take about five minutes for an antidote to get made then it will take that antidote about three minutes to work so you have two minutes, Well one minutes now.
Doragon: Well i'll just have to take you with me then.
Genkaku: You'll allow you're self to die just to kill me?
Doragon: You got that right.
Stands
jounin: This is going to far.
Jounin2: We should stop them.
Kakashi: Don't, You stop them and it will be like killing Doragon. Let him fight if he can't win within a couple of minutes he'll give up.
Jounin: I hope you're right.
Arena
Doragon: Katon Dragon Breath No Jutsu. (Just as he was about to do the jutsu he collapses uncouncious)
Genkaku: I also knew you wouldn't give up so i put an effect in the poison that would knock you uncouncious if you tried to use any jutsu, There is no point in killing you. After all i still have to fight you when you're stronger.
Examiner: Winner Genkaku. Will the opponents for the second semi final match come to the arena please.
[The Medical staff then run out and take Doragon as fast as possible, Mick and tori then get ready to fight.]
Examiner: You can begin.
Mick: Just to let you know you can't win against me.
Tori: Really? We won't know until i try will we.
Mick: Try all you want.
Tori: (Does Hand Seals) Suiton River Blast.
[Water then begins to form at Tori's feet, as the water grows Tori leans down and put's her hand in the water. as she stands up the water goes with her she then throws the water at mick creating a River, As the river get's closer to Mick it get's faster and faster until it reaches it's maximum speed]
Mick: Not bad(Does Hand Seals) Water Shield.
[ Water the appears infront of Mick and forms a large shield, as the river hits the shield it only makes it stronger]
Tori: How is that possible, you're an earth user.
Mick: You really shouldn't go around making those decisions.
Tori: So you're earth and water.
Mick: Me i am a support specialist, The support jutsu that i specialise in.
Tori: Is elemental.
Mick: Yep. Water is useless against me.
Troi: Well that's not true if my attack is stronger than water support skill then it will break through it and hit you.
Mick: Well that's right i guess, But i don't have time to play about.
Tori: Neither do i. Great water blast.(Spits out a big water bomb that heads for Mick at a fast speed)
Mick: Konoha Body Bind.
[Tori then begins to dodge the vines that come out of the ground, As the water bomb hit's the water shield it breaks through and explodes. Mick luckily dodges it]
Mick: Razor Wind.
[Tori is then caught in a wind, The wind then begins to cut her. After twenty seconds she is throwen out of the wind with serious injuries which make her unable to continue]
Examiner: Winner Mick. There will be a five minute break before the final match to let the finalist have a rest.
Medical Room
Medic: We have managed to cure the poison, But it had side effects.
Hokage: What side effects?
Medic: Well from our analysis we have know that he won't be able to fight to his fullest for at least two weeks.
Hokage: How long will it be til he can leave the hospital?
Medic: He can leave the hospital in three days.
Hokage: Ok, Keep him in hospital for the two weeks.
Medic: Any reason?
Hokage: I am not sending him on any missions or letting him train while he has side effects from the poison, It would be to dangerous.
Medic: I see. Two weeks it is then.
Hokage: Don't tell him he will be free to leave in three days, If he ask's tell him two weeks.
Medic: if you dont mind me asking why do you want to keep him in for two weeks?
Hokage: Because when he get's out he will be looking for a mission, and since he will be made a Chunin from his two matches performances he will want a Chunin rank mission.
Medic: I see.
Arena
Examiner: Begin.
Genkaku: So it's you in the final with me.
Mick: You hurt my cousin so i'll be getting pay back on his behalf.
Genkaku: You're going to wish you never said that.
Mick: Whatever.
Genkaku: Demonical Seal.( Eye's go black and the Cloud appears) Demonic Wave.
[The Cloud then grows larger and turns into a wave of black water, The wave then charges for Mick]
Mick: {That looks like water so all i have to do is use a shield} Defensive Force - Water Type.
[A large water bubble then appears behind mick, Mick is then pulled into it for an alround defence]
Genkaku: Nice try.
Mick: That wave is water so this will absorb the damage.
Genkaku: No it won't The cloud has mearly taken the form of water it isn't actual water you idiot.
Mick: **** he's right(Looks at the wave as it is seconds away from hitting him) Damn i can't do anything.
Genkaku: I'll end this now, (Starts to Put more chakra into his attack) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Mick: {This is my only chance} Body Bind.
[Vines then rap around Genkaku's Body]
Genkaku: What use will this do you?
Mick: Alot of good actually, Chakra Consumption.
[ The vines around genkaku's body then start to consume his chakra, The wave then begins to get smaller. Although it wasn't enough, The wave then crashed through Mick's water bubble and hit's him forcing him to be thrown against the wall. The Vines around Genkaku then begin to get tighter, Mick struggles to get back to his feet after the hit from the wave]
Mick: (Breathing heavily) What an attack, I would be dead right now if i didn't weaken it.
Genkaku: (Smirks) You're right.
Mick: Don't smirk.
Genkaku: (Vines get even tighter, Genkaku then begins to choke) I can't take this anymore. DEMONIC SEAL STAGE 2.
[The Vines are then ripped in piece's as Genkaku unleashes his awesome power from his second stage of Demonical Seal. Genkaku then vanishes infront of Mick, He appears behind him and kicks him up into the air. His Cloud then wraps around Micks waist in mid-air, It then thrashes Mick off the ground multiple time which knock him unciouncious.]
Examiner: Winner Genkaku.
[Genkaku then colapses, The medical staff come and take him and Mick to the infirmary]
Two days later at Konoha Hospital
[Garo walks into Doragons room, and sits on a chair near his bed.]
Garo: Hey.
Doragon: Yo.
Garo: So when you getting outta here?
Doragon: They said two weeks.
Garo: Damn, Oh well You should have used that technique.
Doragon: My body ain't used to it yet, I would have collapsed after the match.
Garo: So that must be the same for Genkaku then.
Doragon: What you mean?
Garo: Oh i forgot to tell you, He won the Tournament. But he collapsed after it because of his Demonical Seal.
Doragon: Oh man i wish i could have seen that, What jackass got defeated by him?
Garo: Mick.
Doragon: Figures. So i take it there both in hospital as well.
Garo: Yep, Genkaku isn't getting the Chunnin rank though, They said he was too concerned with the win other than his well being and he didn't fight intelligently.
Doragon: Good.
Garo: But on the other hand you have been ranked to a Chunnin.
Examiner: Next Fight will be against Mick and Goro.
Mick: You look tough.
Goro: Thanks(Smiles)
Examiner: Begin
Mick: I'm Sorry but i can't hold back.
Goro: Neeither can i.(Does Handseals)
Mick:(Does Handseals) Konoha Style Body Binding 1.
[As Vines come out of the ground Goro jumps to avoid them but the vines follow him up into the air]
Goro: Katon Raising Blaze No Jutsu.
[ Suddenly the Ground shakes as a giant burst of fire came from within the ground and out into the arena, As the fire came out the ground it passed through the vines burning them. Goro then landed on the ground and started doing more hand seals]
Goro: Nice technique, you almost had me.
Mick:Same goes to you i never expected anthing like that.
Goro: Well we can't talk all day so let's meet up after the exam.
Mick: Sure(Does Handseals) Vine Blizzard no Jutsu.
[Suddenly thousands of vines came out the ground and started to gather up as if a blizzard had come into the arena, the Vines then started to move towards Goro at an incredible speed. Goro started to run backwards]
Goro: {What a technique} Tidal Blaze No Jutsu.
[A Tidal wave made of nothing but flames crached into all the vines and incinerated them all the tidal wave then went away, Goro then looked at Mick's feet and noticed vines rapped around his left leg]
Goro: A vine around you're leg?(A vine then comes out the ground and wraps itself around Goro's Body)
Mick: That's right, This vines wraps around my leg and i convert my chakra into it, By doing so i make the vine harder and tougher that's why this vine was protected by you're fire attack. All i had to do was hide it and wait for an opening.
Goro: That's a sneaky trick.
Mick: But it work's, I ahve to finish this now. (Does Handseals) Vine Chakra consumtion.
[The vine wrapped around Goro then consume's and eat's all of Goro's chakra. Goro then collapses]
Examiner: Winner of the Match Mick. The next match will be between Genkaku and Yori.
Examiner: Are you ok?
Yori: (Sweating) I'm fine.
Genkaku: Let's have a good fight.
Yori: We maybe from the same team but i can't hold back.
Genkaku: Neither can i.
Examiner: We'll get started then.
Genkaku: You can fight this first. Genkaku Shadow Copy.
[Genkaku then makes a shadow clone of Yori]
Yori: You want me to fight against myself?
genkaku: Well i ain't really aiming for that, you of all people should know just how back i am at Taijutsu but this clone i just created is just like you, So this is my way of Taijutsu. Have fun.
Yori: You, Little Bastard. Fien i'll play you're game.
[The clone then runs at Yori as it get's near her it suddenly disappears, Yori is then kicked in the back. The clone then grabs Yori and turns her upside down, The clone then jumps up into the air.]
Yori: {What the hell this is my Viper Slam technique} (Looks confused)
Genkaku: Oh sorry i forgot to say that clone can use the technique i have seen you use, that should sort out the confused look you have.
Yori: {Well if it's my move i can counter it, I just have to think............}
[The clone then got into position for the crash that was about to happen]
Yori: {Got it}
[As they headed towards the ground Yori began to move from side to side, when suddenly they hit the ground. Dust then clouded the stadium as the dust settled Yori was standing and the clone had died]
Genkaku: Excellent, well done Yori.
Yori: (Breathing heavy) What did you expect?
Genkaku: Don't get me wrong i knew you would win i ain't dumb, That little test tho has just gave me the upper hand for this next technique.
Yori: What?
Genkaku: (Smirks) Demonic seal(Genkaku's Eye's then turn pitch black and a dark cloud surrounds his body)
Yori: ****.
Genkaku: It's time to end this. (Aim's his arms at Yori) Demonic Demise
[The cloud surrounding Genkaku's body then heads for Yori at an amazing speed, As she dodges it and runs for Genkaku she notices the cloud begining to return to him. She then increases her speed with the cloud behind her as she get's to Genkaku she goes to punch him]
Genkaku: (Looks at Yori) Gotcha.
[More of the dark cloud then burst from Genkaku's body and surrounds Yori stopping her movement completely, Seconds later she collapses uncouncious]
Examiner: Winner Genkaku. Next fight will be between Garo Vs Tori
Garo: I'm gonna enjoy this.
Tori: Keep talking.
Examiner: Begin.
Garo: Don't underestimate me.
Tori: What ever.
Garo: (Get's Angry) I SAID DON'T UNDERESTIMATE ME.
Stands
Mick: Now she's done it.
Genkaku: DOne what exactly?
Mick: Got him mad, She'll lose now.
Doragon: You really are an idiot. I can't believe you're on the same team as me and him, He get's worse when he's angry you idiot.
Mick: Oh it's you that get's better.
Doragon: I never lose my temper in a fight, It's Yori that improves.
Arena
Garo: Oil Slide.
[Garo then spits out oil, Tori trys to dodge it bu fails and slips on it. As she trys to get up she notices oil as actually grabbed her feet]
Tori: What the hell is this?
Garo: My oil, what you didn't think it was normal. My oil is a bit like Gaara's sand in the way that i can control it completely , Which explains why it has grabbed you.
Tori: Well i guess it's the counter attack then. (Does handseals)
Garo: Idon't think so. ignite.
[Suddenly the oil catches fire the fire then spreads down towards Tori]
Tori: Suiton Great Water Blast No Jutsu.
[Tori then fires a large water ball from her hands, As it touches the flames it puts them out straight away the water ball then hit's Garo and explodes. The blast from the explosion send Garo crashing into the arena wall, He then falls to the ground unable to move.]
Examiner: Winner Tori. I will now announce the semi final matches.
Garo: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. MY SPINE.
[Medical staff then come and take Garo away on a stretcher.]
Examiner: The first semi final match will be against Doragon and Genkaku, Which means the second match will be against Mick and Tori.
stands
Doragon: (Shocked expression on his face) I got him................Anyone but him.
Mick: You're worried, About fighting him?
Doragon: I......I....Just...Can't beat him.
Mick: You'll win this time, don't worry.(Smiles)
Doragon: Shut the hell up. I'll be lucky if i even hit him.
Arena
Examiner: Hurry up and come down here.
Genkaku: Taking his time.
Examiner: Now we can begin.
Genkaku: You took you're time, Doragon.
Doragon: Just coming up with a plan that's all.
Genkaku: Won't matter cos i ain't holding back.
Doragon: That's alright, Even if you defeat me aslong as i weaking you enough.
Genkaku: What do you mean by that?
Doragon: That means even if you defeat me i'm making sure you don't win this tournament.
Genkaku: Now you just pissed me off.
Doragon: Have i! Oh well i'm dreadfully sorry.
Genkaku: You smart mouthed bastard, DEMONICAL SEAL.
Doragon: Using that already,(Smirks) You really should learn to take you're time.( Drops a smoke bomb at his feet)
Genkaku: You think smoke will help you.
[The smoke then covers Doragon, genkaku then get's the black clius the surround the smoke]
Genkaku: You have no way out now.
Doragon: {Alright the smoke was the first out of the five parts, Next the Jutsu Seal} (Does handseals) Dragon Cage No jutsu.
Genkaku: Now what you gonna do, I have you trapped and the smoke is settling.
[Suddenly Doragon runs out of the smoke and heads for Genkaku, Genkaku quickly gets the cloud around the smoke to chase after Doragon. As the cloud grabs Doragon Genkaku get's it to rip him in two, Suddenly Doragon turns into a puff of smoke]
Doragon: Third part of my plan is a success.
Genkaku: Third part?
Doragon: Firstly i got you angry which made you wanna finish me off quickly, i used the smoke so you couldn't see me. Then i used a single shadow clone to attack you so the clud you control would go after him, And now it's the fourth part.
Genkaku: Forth part?
Doragon: That's right, Katon Dragon Flames No Jutsu.
Genkaku: ****.
[Genkaku then looks confused as he fails to notice any dragon flames, He turns around and see's them unable to dodge them he get's his black cloud to guard him. But the sheer power of the flames push him back until he stops on a seal which has been placed on the ground]
Doragon: (Smirks) Kai.
[The seal then breaks and Genkaku is put in a cage made of fire, Genkaku then starts to get his chakra drained out of him]
Genkaku: What the hell is this?
Doragon: This is my new technique, i created it for capturing the enemy. It drains you're Chakra which means you could break out even if you had the power too.
Genkaku: You tricked me when telling me you're first three parts of you're plan.
Doragon: Obviously i did, the first part was the smoke, the second was the seal, the third was the clone, The fourth was the attack and the last was capturing you in that cage. If i don't say so myself it was a really good plan.
Genkaku: I have to admit it is a good plan, but this cage won't be able to withstand my Dark Spiral technique.
Doragon: I wouldn't use that it would be a waste of what ever chakra you have left, the cage would consume the chakra before you even finished getting the attack ready.
genkaku: Oh, So that's how this thing works, So all i need to do is find the weak point then.
Doragon: There is no weak point for you to find.
Genkaku: There is a weakness in all Jutsu, Even in Genjutsu there is a weakness. That you can't hide from.
Doragon: You're wasteing you're time. (A sharp pain hit's Doragons chest, He then put's his hand on it) Argh.
Genkaku: So it's started now.
Doragon: What's ...Started?
Genkaku: The posion has started to move through you're body, So tell me which do you think will win? My Poison or you're chakra consuming cage.
Doragon: When did you. AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH.(Falls to his knees)
Genkaku: I'll tell you but it will most likely be the last thing you hear. (Flash back to when Doragon used the smoke bomb and genkaku activated Demonic Seal) When i activated my demonic seal you where hiding in smoke from you're smoke bomb, I used a Bomb i created for this exam it's simply called a poison bomb. I got my Demon cloud to take the bomb and throw it into the smoke, The effects from the poison bomb have a five minute delay. That's why you haven't felt the effects til now, You have about ten minutes to get treatment or you'll die within an hour.
Doragon: You sneaky son of a *****.
Genkaku: So do you think you can win?
Doragon: Well All i have to do is finish you off within ten minutes and i'll be fine.
Genkaku: Actually it will take about five minutes for an antidote to get made then it will take that antidote about three minutes to work so you have two minutes, Well one minutes now.
Doragon: Well i'll just have to take you with me then.
Genkaku: You'll allow you're self to die just to kill me?
Doragon: You got that right.
Stands
jounin: This is going to far.
Jounin2: We should stop them.
Kakashi: Don't, You stop them and it will be like killing Doragon. Let him fight if he can't win within a couple of minutes he'll give up.
Jounin: I hope you're right.
Arena
Doragon: Katon Dragon Breath No Jutsu. (Just as he was about to do the jutsu he collapses uncouncious)
Genkaku: I also knew you wouldn't give up so i put an effect in the poison that would knock you uncouncious if you tried to use any jutsu, There is no point in killing you. After all i still have to fight you when you're stronger.
Examiner: Winner Genkaku. Will the opponents for the second semi final match come to the arena please.
[The Medical staff then run out and take Doragon as fast as possible, Mick and tori then get ready to fight.]
Examiner: You can begin.
Mick: Just to let you know you can't win against me.
Tori: Really? We won't know until i try will we.
Mick: Try all you want.
Tori: (Does Hand Seals) Suiton River Blast.
[Water then begins to form at Tori's feet, as the water grows Tori leans down and put's her hand in the water. as she stands up the water goes with her she then throws the water at mick creating a River, As the river get's closer to Mick it get's faster and faster until it reaches it's maximum speed]
Mick: Not bad(Does Hand Seals) Water Shield.
[ Water the appears infront of Mick and forms a large shield, as the river hits the shield it only makes it stronger]
Tori: How is that possible, you're an earth user.
Mick: You really shouldn't go around making those decisions.
Tori: So you're earth and water.
Mick: Me i am a support specialist, The support jutsu that i specialise in.
Tori: Is elemental.
Mick: Yep. Water is useless against me.
Troi: Well that's not true if my attack is stronger than water support skill then it will break through it and hit you.
Mick: Well that's right i guess, But i don't have time to play about.
Tori: Neither do i. Great water blast.(Spits out a big water bomb that heads for Mick at a fast speed)
Mick: Konoha Body Bind.
[Tori then begins to dodge the vines that come out of the ground, As the water bomb hit's the water shield it breaks through and explodes. Mick luckily dodges it]
Mick: Razor Wind.
[Tori is then caught in a wind, The wind then begins to cut her. After twenty seconds she is throwen out of the wind with serious injuries which make her unable to continue]
Examiner: Winner Mick. There will be a five minute break before the final match to let the finalist have a rest.
Medical Room
Medic: We have managed to cure the poison, But it had side effects.
Hokage: What side effects?
Medic: Well from our analysis we have know that he won't be able to fight to his fullest for at least two weeks.
Hokage: How long will it be til he can leave the hospital?
Medic: He can leave the hospital in three days.
Hokage: Ok, Keep him in hospital for the two weeks.
Medic: Any reason?
Hokage: I am not sending him on any missions or letting him train while he has side effects from the poison, It would be to dangerous.
Medic: I see. Two weeks it is then.
Hokage: Don't tell him he will be free to leave in three days, If he ask's tell him two weeks.
Medic: if you dont mind me asking why do you want to keep him in for two weeks?
Hokage: Because when he get's out he will be looking for a mission, and since he will be made a Chunin from his two matches performances he will want a Chunin rank mission.
Medic: I see.
Arena
Examiner: Begin.
Genkaku: So it's you in the final with me.
Mick: You hurt my cousin so i'll be getting pay back on his behalf.
Genkaku: You're going to wish you never said that.
Mick: Whatever.
Genkaku: Demonical Seal.( Eye's go black and the Cloud appears) Demonic Wave.
[The Cloud then grows larger and turns into a wave of black water, The wave then charges for Mick]
Mick: {That looks like water so all i have to do is use a shield} Defensive Force - Water Type.
[A large water bubble then appears behind mick, Mick is then pulled into it for an alround defence]
Genkaku: Nice try.
Mick: That wave is water so this will absorb the damage.
Genkaku: No it won't The cloud has mearly taken the form of water it isn't actual water you idiot.
Mick: **** he's right(Looks at the wave as it is seconds away from hitting him) Damn i can't do anything.
Genkaku: I'll end this now, (Starts to Put more chakra into his attack) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Mick: {This is my only chance} Body Bind.
[Vines then rap around Genkaku's Body]
Genkaku: What use will this do you?
Mick: Alot of good actually, Chakra Consumption.
[ The vines around genkaku's body then start to consume his chakra, The wave then begins to get smaller. Although it wasn't enough, The wave then crashed through Mick's water bubble and hit's him forcing him to be thrown against the wall. The Vines around Genkaku then begin to get tighter, Mick struggles to get back to his feet after the hit from the wave]
Mick: (Breathing heavily) What an attack, I would be dead right now if i didn't weaken it.
Genkaku: (Smirks) You're right.
Mick: Don't smirk.
Genkaku: (Vines get even tighter, Genkaku then begins to choke) I can't take this anymore. DEMONIC SEAL STAGE 2.
[The Vines are then ripped in piece's as Genkaku unleashes his awesome power from his second stage of Demonical Seal. Genkaku then vanishes infront of Mick, He appears behind him and kicks him up into the air. His Cloud then wraps around Micks waist in mid-air, It then thrashes Mick off the ground multiple time which knock him unciouncious.]
Examiner: Winner Genkaku.
[Genkaku then colapses, The medical staff come and take him and Mick to the infirmary]
Two days later at Konoha Hospital
[Garo walks into Doragons room, and sits on a chair near his bed.]
Garo: Hey.
Doragon: Yo.
Garo: So when you getting outta here?
Doragon: They said two weeks.
Garo: Damn, Oh well You should have used that technique.
Doragon: My body ain't used to it yet, I would have collapsed after the match.
Garo: So that must be the same for Genkaku then.
Doragon: What you mean?
Garo: Oh i forgot to tell you, He won the Tournament. But he collapsed after it because of his Demonical Seal.
Doragon: Oh man i wish i could have seen that, What jackass got defeated by him?
Garo: Mick.
Doragon: Figures. So i take it there both in hospital as well.
Garo: Yep, Genkaku isn't getting the Chunnin rank though, They said he was too concerned with the win other than his well being and he didn't fight intelligently.
Doragon: Good.
Garo: But on the other hand you have been ranked to a Chunnin.
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