Chapter 1


"Naruto!, Naruto!, Naruto wake u-". "What is it Sakura Im sleepin here."Come on Naruto get up". Inside its just about 9:00am bringgggg goes the alarm clock, Sakura picks it up and throws it away in the garbage can. "Nice throw Sakura"I said get UP!! and hits Naruto in the head, one second later a huge lump develops on the top of his head. "OWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!!"What was that for Sakura, "I told you to get up you idiot!!!" Punches him and he flys across his room, and lands in the garbage can. "YEAH!!! two points" Sakura yells. Naruto stays in the garbage for a minute thinking of what to do. Hmm should i go out there and get hit or listen to what she says. I think i will listen to what she says". "Ok Sakura I'm up, theres no need to hit me". "Ok good get dressed sensei wants to meet us at the Ramen shop that you always go to, he said something about buying us breakfast or Ramen"."Hey Sakura are you feeling OK."Why do you need a hug Sakura, huh Sakura are you feeling OK?""WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!!!!!" Punches him and Naruto flys out his apartment with nothing but his pajamas on and his cap.
As Naruto flys out the Window he notices that there are almost no clouds outside or anything. " Ah at least today is a nice day" Naruto lands on the ground with a hard plump. Naruto starts to get up, and begins to stretch his legs out first, then arms, then his neck." HEY NARUTO GET BACK UP HERE AND GET DRESSED!!!" Naruto runs up the wall with the chakra in his feet holding him frimly, he begins to slip,"AH CRAP!!" Just before Naruto hits the ground he yells Kage Bunshin No Jutsu, and lands on his clones.
"Ah the hell with it and Naruto jumps up to his front door, and examines his window. There is a huge hole right in the middle of it. All he does is frown." Naruto quickly scurrys Sakura out, and gets dressed in 5 seconds. Opens the front door and yells " RAMEN!!!!!", and Runs to the Ramen shop With walking behind lost in her memory's about Sasuke, and there last adventure and wonders when Sasuke will come back.

Is this your fanfic?

Umm....yeah, wrong section for one, and you really just need to put each chapter in the same thread. ~_^

ok, but i write the chapters then type them, and then i have post them in the same thread!!!!. Geeese you make it so hard.

Not really. It's both forum and fic etiquette.

yeah crudus is sort of right but o well good story none the less!

thanks I like also like my storys. They are sort of well interesting, thats what I think of them.

It is in the wrong forum but I like the story. It is kind of funny. But a little fast pace, maybe you could slow down the other writes a little more.

i am trying to improve the storys as they go on, I get bettter at it more, and more. Well Technically im still a novice writer so gimmie a break already.

lol. Calm down. I dont think giving you a break will solve the problem. Just keep up the good work.

I don't know about you guys, but Sakura is looking for a sure case of smacked bottom.

we all think that but its naruto who gets his bottem smacked.and its all the time to.

I know, I know, I like how it is developing though...I can't seem to find you other chapters.

i think i will post the rest of them in this thread, or another one.

OK this topic is in the wrong section this should of gonto Fanfics section. So ya topis is now moved.

OK,so thats 2 times it was moved, or is it 5 times, i dont know, just lost count