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My try at writing an all-in-one fanfic chapter series...

Oh and this is a fanfic where I don't know what age to make them.


As when does the time come when our orange ninja isn't doing something. well he isn't doing anything right now as he is just walking through the village. kicking rocks...wow, very boring, let's see if something interesting will happen shall we.
On another hand we have Hinata trying to perfect her training and Ino tending to her flowers.
Kiba and Akamaru are just prowling the area and Shino is out bug collecting.
Shikamaru is taking a nap (about Temari) and Choji is having his afternoon snacks.
Sakura is just learning to become a medical ninja and Lee is out training with TenTen, Neji, and Gai sensei.
Hanabi and Konohamaru, Moegi, and Udon are training together to see who's better and to just get stronger.

And Sasuke is doing some crazy, gay-a** sh-....Stuff....



Back to Hinata's training, she has been setting out to become stronger and that's what she's doing. Since her Byakugan has been improved she now has to train with the gentle fist technique and prove she isn't a burden to anyone anymore! and on a side note, trying not to faint when she gets close to Naruto...
"Hm, this isn't working...I need to battle with someone else." Hinata said when she was alone on the training grounds. "But who. well Kiba and Shino are away. I don't feel like seeing Sakura right now, can't disturb Choji while he's eating now-a-days. Shikamaru would be too tired, Hanabi is out with Konohamaru. Lee, TenTen and Neji are probably out in the forest doing their own training, can't disturb them...." And as Hinata pondered on this, well she can't really ask for a battle with Naruto now can she, but who's left....



Ino is out tending to her flowers, "ah, It's such a nice day out, I wish I could do something else, but these flowers need my attention, and there's really nothing else to do..." Ino has a need to do something then the regular routine duties aroung the Yamanaka Flower Shop. "stupid Sakura, with her new training I have no one to fight, especially with the everyone else busy...ugh."
"Ino! The roselias need tending to!"
"Yes Father." and this goes on Flowers need watering, some need wrapping and to be delivered. Ino hears someone calling her name.
"HEY INO!!"
"Huh?" Hinata comes running by, looking more like a stronger more determined Hinata.
"Ino, wanna help me train by a battle?"
"Uh, Sure!" Ino said while finishing up a boquet and telling her dad she's leaving the shop for a while.


"Ok, you want an all out battle or,"
"All-out!"
"O-okay." 'wow, what's making her so energetic today?'
They get into starting position. 3,2,1, START BATTLE!
Ino starts off with a kick that hits Hinata's leg hard. "*grunts*"
After a while of 16-hit combos, 64 palm gaurds, some flower power and some chakra flow techniques the fight ends,
*pant pant*
*pant pant pant*
"Wow Hinata, you've gotten stronger." Ino said while wiping her chin.
"Th-thanx Ino." Hinata said doing the same.
They both fall, but Ino falls backwards and off the building they were atop of!
"AH!!"
"INO!"
Naruto then walks toward the same building and looks up. "OH MY GOSH INO!" Naruto ran and put his arms out to catch her.
"Naruto you spaz, I coulda landed safely.."
"Yeah but not by the looks of it. Had another battle with Sakura?"
"No a batle with Hi-"
"Well at least you're safe." Ino stares at Naruto's eyes, in a way she has never before. "Now get outta here!"
"Naruto! You're such a spaz! You hafta put me down first!"
"Oh r-right heh.." Naruto puts Ino down.
"UGH!" Ino tries to hide something by acting like a normal teenage girl, she walks away.
.............
"Now what's gotten into Ino? and why was she looking at my eyes funny? welp another mystery, and she was about to say who she was fighting with? who?! oh man, i can't handle all of this curiosity...just like the time with the beautiful woman at the waterfall..."

Meanwhile Hinata poofs herself down, with a very hurt leg...


It's a very nice sunny day, Naruto was still making his daily rounds through the village center. He suddenly sees Hinata hurt, he then goes to the nearby merchant to buy some ointment. Then goes up to Hinata. "Um, hey Hinata, what's wrong?"
"Oh, Naruto, it's n-nothing really." She said in surprise while holding her leg.
"You sure, you seem hurt."
"No, no.." Hinata puts her leg down and falls. Naruto catches her, and she starts to blush.
"Here Hinata." Handing her the ointment.
"I-is this for me?" Hinata used the ointment.
"Well, seeing as your all better i must get going. Later." he said as he poofed away.
Hinata stands there into the open space. "Thanks alot. Naruto-kun." a smile appears. Then all of a sudden her father appears. "Hinata, it's time for your training."
"Yes father." then she says in her mind, 'I must train, to get stronger for Naruto-kun'. They went back to the house.

"I wonder what elese is happening today, it's very boring. Hey maybe Grandma Tsunade has a mission!" Naruto ran to the hokage's mansion.
"ah when do I ever get a break, it's paper work this, paper work that. sign this, stamp those." Tsunade complained as she was reveiwing all the paperwork on her desk.
"Lady Tsunade, you have a visitor."
"send them in Shizune."
"I hafta warn you,"
"Just send them in."
"alright." as saying that an orange blur comes rushing in.
"Grandma Tsunade do you have a mission for me today?!" Naruto Bursted out with his usual hyperactive quest to become the best!
'Hmm, maybe i can get him to catch Jaraiya for me, i don't really have the strangth to go after him today.' "Yes actually I do, we have been getting complaints about Jaraiya lately, peeping and barging in and such.
"yeah, and what do you want me to do about it?" Naruto put on a bland face.
"I want you to hang out with him, and if he does anything of that sort, you have permission to arrest him and bring him to me. Understood."
'Aw man, another low rank mission i guess, but i guess any mission is good on a boring day like this, and maybe I can get back at pervy sage for standing up my training!' "Ok grandma."
"Good, now leave." Naruto hangs his head and leaves.
"Lady Tsunade. You have also more paperwork."
"Shizune, who is it from this time?" 'I shoulda let Naruto handle being hokage instead...'

Naruto started walking around in search of Master Jaraiya. "Now where can pervy sage be....THE HOT SPRINGS!" then Naruto poofed to the hotsprings. "Hm, now where can he be. PervySage?" He was no where to be found. "Well, i guess he's not here. I should stay here, he'll eventually show up. na, ima go to Ichiraku, he could be around there." Naruto headed back to the village center, and to a surprise there was Jaraiya slurpin down some ramen. Naruto sneaked up to him. "Hey Pervy Sage!"
"ah, Naruto. what brings you here?"
"Well, I thought we'd get in some training!"
"Well how about we just eat, i have some business to take care of."
"Ok." Naruto can't refuse a chance to eat. so as they finished Jaraiya left. "Ok, now to check back at the hot springs." Naruto went and finally Jaraiya was there, giggling to himself saying 'research'. "HEY PERVY SAGE!"
"Wha! Oh Naruto, it's just you."
"YOU HAVE STOOD UP THE TRAINING FOR A VERY LONG TIME! NOW FOR PAYBACK!"
"What, you're going to challenge me?"
"YES I AM PERVYSAGE! I have learned how to control my chakra since then. I think I can take you."
"Naruto, I'ts not thinking you can beat me, IT'S BELIEVING IF YOU COULD!!!" and with that said the fight began!
............(what it's the usual Ransengan vs Ransengan, then you have the Naruto Uzumaki barrage, the spiky hair thing-a-ma-jig...yeah, a typical same strength fight I guess)...........
*pant pant*
*pant pant pant*
"Good job...but you still need more training" Jaraiya falls..and there's a wood block that goes poof.
"WHAT! A FAKE!"
"Ha! see I told you you needed more training!"
"Well, seeeing as I have my mission completed."
"Wh-what?!"
Then Tsunade appears. "Good work Naruto. Now Jaraiya."
"Oh, Tsunade. I uh. I was just taking a walk with Naruto here, right."
"Ha, right. I sent him, your coming with me." Tsunade grabbed Jaraiya by the ear. "OW OW OW, C'mon Tsunade, lemme go PLE-EASE!"

"Ugh, i'll never understand them. Oh well at least i got some food out of it." Tsunade re-appears. "Thanks Naruto, here is 3000 ryo for helping me."
"wow, thanks grandma!" I think I'll go get some dumplings with these.


Hinata now goes back home to continue training with her father. Unfortunately Neji and Hanabi are still doing their own thing for a lil bit...very Intense...I'll tell you soon....
"8 trigram 64 palm gaurd! *pant* *pant*"
"That's enough for today Hinata."
"yes father." Hinata bowed and left.
"Hm, what to do, what to do. I can go find Sakura, maybe she'll agree to eat some dumplings with me, but where can she be...maybe by the river." Naruto said as he was walking around. He went in search of Sakura but she was no where to be found. "Aw, where can Sakura be..." then he sees Sakura and Ino having a fight.
"No Sasuke's mine!"
"No he's mine!"
"Ya right."
"Look who's talking!"
"Those are fighting words!"
"Bring it! 16 hit combo!"
"Cha! I won't lose!"
Naruto interrupts, "Hey Sakura,"
"SHUT UP NARUTO!" Ino and Sakura both yelled. 'I better not get in their way...well, i guess i'm eating alone.'
Naruto heads to eat alone...aw poor naruto. When Naruto gets there he sees someone.
"H-hey, Naruto."
"Oh, hey Hinata." 'Maybe she would like to join me, i don't feel like eating alone right now.' "You wanna eat some dumplings with me?"
"Uh uh uh, sure!"
"Ok." 'I wonder what makes her do that..' and as they sit down to eat there was an awkward silence.
"Hm, this dumplings don't taste as sweet as usual, and i got a pretty big sweet tooth to fill, how do you like them Hinata?"
"Um, they are, ok.." 'Now I know how I can pay back Naruto'
They finish having their little date.
"Thanks N-Naruto."
"No Problem Hinata..."
"W-well, Bye." and with that she poofed.
"O-Ok..now she has got me stuttering...man what makes her do that?! seriously I'm very curious" Naruto kept pondering....


Naruto still walks around...pondering...about the two weird girls he saw today.... On another note I guess we should check-up on the rest of the ninjas...hmm..AHA! there goes Shikamaru..napping -.-....let's go poke inside his dreams...

Shikamaru is taking his usual re-charge naps in his spot before a shoji game. he seem to be mumbling about something....
"T....Te....Tem...Temar...Temari..." Shikamaru turns to his side....hm Temari? (isn't she like 3 years older than him, oh well you can't stop true love!) let's poke into his dream...*takes a stick and pokes a hole so we can see*
Oh, it's about the time where the went in search of Sasuke, and Temari comes in and helps him....aw...i knew he was dreaming about her...huh? oh he's waking up.
"Ah, what a good nap. Now I should find someone to play shoji with..." He looks around. "There's Ino, she probably doesn't have anything better to do....HEY INO!" Shikamaru waves to Ino down below carrying an order of flowers.
"WHAT'S UP SHIKAMARU?"
"NOTHING WANNA PLAY A GAME OF SHOJI?"
"CAN'T RIGHT NOW, MAYBE LATER."
"ALRIGHT!" Shikamaru said, then Ino went on walking. "ugh, I don't think Temari would be here any time soon...*sigh* I'll just go meet up with Choji." As said Shikamaru got up and went to meet Choji.

"Hey what brings you here?! *munch crunch*" Choji said while eating.
"Ah nothing much. You?"
"*munch* Hm, well i did see another Sakura vs Ino of whose Sasuke's fight but there was something different about it.*gulp*"
"What was different?" This has Shika curious.
"Well *munch* It was like *gulp* Ino didn't give it her best at all. *sip* Like she probably moved on."
"Then how come she's still fighting Sakura about him? *yawn*"
"I don't know...not like I ever really knew...." seems like a sensitive spot hit Choji while talking about Ino.
"Woah, cheer up there bu-ddy."
"Ah, I'm over it *munch munch*"


Okay we'll find out about those 3 later too. Hm I wonder what Gai Sensei is teaching Neji, TenTen, and Lee. Hm, he's really not teaching just working out with Lee and TenTen and Neji are having a battle, seems intresting...

"C'mon Neji, I'll prove weapons and long range attacks are better!"
"TenTen, short range attacks work efficiently, and accurately." Neji and TenTen prepared for battle.
"Hey Gai sensei, you think there is something going on between those 2?"
"Well, opposites do attract. All we can do now is keep on building stamina!"
"Alright Gai Sensei." Lee looked as Neji and TenTen started for a battle. 'Is there really something between those 2?'Gai and Lee did the push-ups, the squats, and the posing while TenTen and Neji ahve their ...most amazing fight...

"C'mon Neji I know you can do better!"
'Byakugan!, hm, she's not over by the bushes, or near the trio of trees...aha over there'
Kunei knives with paper bombs attached came toward him and Neji dodged them and went after TenTen
"8 Trigram 64 Palm strike!"
*pant pant*
*pant pant*
TenTen smirks "HIYA!" TenTen attacks with a staff. "c'mon Neji, weapons are best!" She keeps trying to stab and hit him.
"Tenten, short range fist attacks are great also." He keeps dodging her attacks.

"Seems like a very feirce battle today."
"Really. Let's go watch." Gai and Lee finished the remaining push-ups and went to watch Neji and TenTen's battle. "Yeah! Let that fire in your belly burn!" Gai couldn't help but yell out in this intense battle.
"Huh? *blink blink*"
Then Neji comes in and palms Tenten to the ground
"*groans* no fair...I was distracted." Tenten said as she was lying down.
"That's IT! I got a new lesson!"
"What is it Gai Sensei?!" Lee acts all excited.
"We are going to learn how to not be distracted during combat! and it's thanks to you Tenten."
"*groans*" is what Tenten replies with.
"C'mon TenTen, it'll be great."
"Tenten..." Neji helps Tenten up. "Good fight."
"Thanks" She said dusting herself. "Good fight to you too."

Hanabi and the Konohamaru Ninja Squad are having their own, some-what funny battle.
"WINDMILL!"
"KONOHAMARU NINJA SQUAD ATTACK!"
And this keeps going on, and does sexy jutsu work on girls? I don't know but when the time comes I guess we'll find out. I know it works on Jaraiya.

Sakura is studying hard to become a medical ninja after her little arguement with Ino. "hm, I wonder what happened to her. She seemed like she didn't really wanna win." Sakura said talking to herself while practicing on a rabbit with a broken foot. Being by herself gives Sakura a lot of time to think and wonder, like if she really does love Naruto. "Do I really care more for Naruto, since he's going the extra mile just for the request I gave him...*sigh*" Still recovering cute lil bunnies. "I don't think so, he's so childish, it's probably just respect I'm feeling. He really does stand by his ninja way. I'm pretty sure Sasuke will come back in no time." As Sakura keeps telling herself that Sasuke will come back for her. Tsunade comes in.
"Sakura, good job on the bunnies, I think you might be able to step-up your training a lil bit."
"Really Lady Tsunade?" Sakura still concentrating on the bunny till it's fully healed.
"Yes, so we just got a call for a little academy student who got hurt. If you can heal his broken arm then we'll see. Consider this as your test for the day."
"Yes Lady Tsunade! I'm on my way!" Sakura left towards the academy.

"Oh hey Sakura!"
"Naruto I have no time."
"Why?! but I was hoping we'd get something to eat."
"When I wanna eat I'll contact you."
"But Sakuraa!"
"Naruto I have something very important to do! Now scram!"
"Sakura?!"
Sakura then punches Naruto back to his house. "Ow, she still can really pack a punch."
"He asked for it." Sakura then hurried to heal the lil kid.

"Hey Iruka-Sensei." Sakura said.
"Oh hey Sakura, are you here to heal Udon?"
"Yes."
"Right this way." Iruka led Sakura outside of the academy to where Hanabi is sitting down and Konhamaru is being like a lil kid and Moegi is trying to help Udon who is crying in pain. "He hurt his arm while trying to do a move in their battle with Hanabi."
"I see. C'mon Udon, can you let go of your arm for a few minutes?"
"*sniffle* C-can you make it all better?"
"That's what I'm here for." Sakura said with a smile.
"A-alright." Udon let go of his arm and Sakura mends to heal it superbly, it takes a couple of minutes though.


Kiba with Akamaru almost bumps into a running Hinata, but she swiftly moves to not bump into them. "Sorry I gotta do something!"
"wha?" Akamaru gives a lil bark. "That was Hinata right?" Akamaru agrees. "She must've gotten better to do that, and what is she in a hurry for?" Akamaru looks confused. "Well it's out of our hands, and after training we should go to Shushuya's get something good to eat." "Rawr ruff!" Akamaru likes that idea.
On the way to Shushuya's he bumps into Naruto. "NARUTO!"
"Aw man, c'mon Kiba please, this day is already weird enough."
"Weird how?"
"Well Hinata's being more than her usual self,"
"That's not new."
"You didn't let me finish. Then Ino falls and acts weird when I catch her,"
"Now that's odd."
"LET ME FINISH! Then I go ask Sakura just for a bite to eat and she punches me to kingdom come!"
"Not new. Only the one with Ino is new."
"But what's up with most of the girls around here?!"
"If you didn't get it by now. Good Luck."
"GOOD LUCK WHAT DOES THAT MEAN?!"
"It means if you don't let me and Akamaru get a bite to eat then Akamaru will teach you a lesson." "Rawruff!"
"Oh, then can I come with you?"
"You can, but who says you will." Kiba and Akamaru keeps on walking. Naruto catches up to them. "Fine, just don't be a nuisence."
"Ok." Kiba and Naruto head out to eat...

Let's check back with Ino. She's busy doing her duties around the store again, this time she was doing deliveries. "Please choose the Yamanaka Flower Shop for all your flower needs ^^, Have a nice day." With that said she finished up the last of her deliveries, so she took her time getting back to the shop. "Hm, why did I stop mid-sentence from looking into Naruto's eyes. I never knew how good he looked then, but can I give up on Sasuke? Maybe I don't have to...Maybe. Maybe, I think so...Yeah, it's just a matter of time." What's cooking up in that blonde head of hers? Speaking of cooking what's Hinata cooking up? Back at the Hyuga Residence, "Almost done. heh." Hinata smiled as she looked in the pot on the stove.
"Hinata time for more training."
"Um, Father, May I please go give this food to some of my friends?"
"Well, you worked hard today. Come back right after."
"Yes Father." BRIING the mysterious food is done. Hinata goes and wraps it up, and rushes out of the house. I wonder what she made....

Ino still pondering on the thought of having feelings for Naruto as she did for Sasuke got her in some what of a mix. "Really Naruto and I are the same when you think about it, but if we really have these feelings why we act like enemies? Oh, this is killing me." Then she sees Hinata. "Oh Hey Hinata!"
Hinata stops running. "Hello Ino, h-have you seen Naruto?"
"Maybe he's out in one of the food stores again. Check by Ichiraku's I guess."
"Oh, I hope he'll still be hungry.."
"Why?"
"It's n-nothing."
"I'll help search for him."
"Thanks Ino."
They searched and searched and searched some more. Thank God what ever she made hasn't gone cold yet. Here comes Naruto.
"H-Hi Naruto."
"Hey Hinata *pant pant*"
"What happened to you?"
"INO?!"
"Um, what d-did h-happen to you Naruto?"
"Oh um, I was going with Kiba and Akamaru for a bite to eat and talk to him about something, then we got into a fight, and *pant*"
"And he kicked your butt and you ran all the way over here."
"No Ino. Shino and his new bugs came after me, I swear, when I GETTA cHANCE!" Naruto yelled into an empty space. Then Hinata started to say something.
"I, m-made this f-for you." She opens the box to reveal a box full of dumplings. "You told me, you liked sweets so I m-made these." Naruto grabs one and takes a bite.
"WOW Hinata *munch* These are great!"
"Hey Hinata, may I try one?"
"Of course." Ino grabbed one and they all sat down and started eating. "WoW, Hinata did you really make these?!" Ino and Naruto said simultaniously. Hinata noded her head yes as she took a bite, then she realizes the suns going down but stayed a bit longer.
"*gulp* ah...that hit the spot. Thanks a lot Hinata."
"No thank you Naruto."
"I hafta set up some stuff at home so I gotta go."
"*gulp* See ya later spaz."
"Bye Hinata, later Ino..." Then Naruto poofed away.

"These really are good, so why'd ya make it for him?"
"Oh well after our fight earlier, my leg was still pretty hurt, and Naruto came by with some ointment and helped me." Hinata started to blush. "Then later he asked me to go eat some dumplings with him and he complained they weren't sweet enough so I decided to make these as a symbol of my thanks."
"Oh, then why'd you let me have some?"
"Not really sure why." They see the sunset. "OH NO! I gotta go home! I promised I'd be back right after!"
"Later Hinata!"
"Bye Ino." Hinata ran home with her empty box.
"Maybe I shoulda told her that Naruto caught me, but it's maybe for the best. I don't want her to think I'm also a part of Naruto's heart." and thus Ino went home finishing the last of the dumplings.

And so the day ends with lots of training, fighting, a couple of dates, a pervy mission, and getting scared off by bugs. Seems like the Naruverse is now taking a part in the drama on the inside then the fighting on the out.
See ya in My Naruto FanFics part 2.

by: naruhina 4eva!!!!!!!!! on Jul 27 2008, 05:26 AM

awesome!!!!

& go hinata!!!!!!:]

by: meira-anime on Aug 1 2008, 06:26 AM

WOH!!! way cool sis!! love it!! =3 mahe the second!! XD

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